LourDeath Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 here's are the othershttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-197626.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Your OCG is ok but there is some small errors: When it says Pay 1000 Life Points when this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard. It should say: Decrease your Life Points by 1000, if this card is Summoned from the Graveyard. Also when it says the effect of that card is used as the effect of this card, It should rea: This card gains the equipped card's effect. The picture is fine My Rate 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shong96 Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 i thought the OCG was pretty okay....8.9/10? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted April 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Your OCG is ok but there is some small errors: When it says Pay 1000 Life Points when this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard. It should say: Decrease your Life Points by 1000' date=' if this card is Summoned from the Graveyard. Also when it says the effect of that card is used as the effect of this card, It should rea: This card gains the equipped card's effect. The picture is fine My Rate 7/10[/quote'] "gains"... that is the term i've been thinking... thanks sir... ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Your OCG is ok but there is some small errors: When it says Pay 1000 Life Points when this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard. It should say: Decrease your Life Points by 1000' date=' if this card is Summoned from the Graveyard. Also when it says the effect of that card is used as the effect of this card, It should rea: This card gains the equipped card's effect. The picture is fine My Rate 7/10[/quote'] "gains"... that is the term i've been thinking... thanks sir... ^.^ Pleasure to be of service. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted April 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 i'll change the OCG later...still reading some threads.. heheh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 a little too much atk power for lv7 OCG has been pointed out already, I'd just lower the atk to 3000 or something 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 thanks sir Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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