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Once per turn, decrease this card ATK by 100. When this card has 0 ATK, inflict 2000 damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed while it have 500 or more ATK, increase your Life Points equal to the ATK of the monster that destroyed this card. If your Life Points are 1000 or less, your opponent lose 1000 Life Points each turn.

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"Once per turn, decrease this card ATK by 100. When this card has 0 ATK, inflict 2000 damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed while it have 500 or more ATK, increase your Life Points equal to the ATK of the monster that destroyed this card. If your Life Points are 1000 or less, your opponent lose 1000 Life Points each turn."

 

I would have written the effect like this:

 

"Once per turn, decrease the ATK of this card by 100 points. When the ATK of this card is reduced to 0, inflict 2000 points of damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed with 500 STK or higher, increase your life points equal to the ATK of the attacking monster. If your Life Points are 100 or less, your opponent loses 1000 Life Points every turn"

 

In my opinion, it would take much too long a period of time for the second effect to work, where the opponent takes 2000 points of damage when the attack reaches zero. You may want to increase the amount lost every turn.

 

Also, if you are spelling the name "Lihght Magician" as in "I turned on the light", you have added one extra "h" before the "g".

 

You have some interesting ideas, and the design on the card is suited and very appealing. Truly beautiful.

 

My Rate 8/10 (the picture gets a 10/10 on its own)

-CASPERULTIMATUM

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