amnail Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 i went away and fixed him up a bit i don't know if the effect is ocg but tell me what you think now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 1. you can just say alll elemantal heros in graveyard not the rest of it 2. you can just edit the other post instead of making a new one. ^_^anyway thats a bit better 8/10 still ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 Eh. Work on grammar, OCG, etc. Read the yugioh wiki for a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rpenergy Posted December 27, 2007 Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 cool pic although the effect looks kinda awkward mainly because the fusion material monsters are on 2 seperate lines. over-all 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tsuby Posted December 27, 2007 Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 Nice name and let's say good pic.Too hard to summon,and anywayz,last time I check EH aren't worth it,maybe just in Big City.Some grammar mistakes,but I understand you. 7/10[sorry] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted December 27, 2007 Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 Hey the effect can any one notice some of the effect is based on shaning flare wingman or shining phoenix enforcer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jak35 Posted December 27, 2007 Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 not bad the effect should have a better OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted December 27, 2007 Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 ok can be fixed 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmania2260 Posted December 27, 2007 Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 Needs a lot more OCG. Picture is good, needs strecthing and cropping though. Otherwise, pretty good. Perhaps add an effect that involves Skyscraper. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amnail Posted December 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 thanks for the posts he needs a bit of fixing up but ill get there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 Effect: "This monster's ATK is increased by 200 points for every monster with 'Elemental Hero' in its card name in your Graveyard." That should fix the problem with the size of the font as well. I don't really like the effect, it reminds me of Shining Flare Wingman, you should think up something more original. I like the picture, but it needs to be fixed, and it's a nice fusion idea. Lose the '-' between Caped and Crusader as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 6/10 nice pic, fusion and name but effect is on the down side a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Yeah the effect could be better, maybe having something to do with Skyscraper, idk. Follow the example Ixigo put for the OCG. Also, this card should be a LIGHT attribute in my opinion. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 The grammar is a little........meh. =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 Grammar problems, good pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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