Vampire Card

[Diaboli Mors]

Ok I'm not very good at making cards but i just made one. Ocg assistance would be much appreciated...

 

[spoiler=Lore:Vampire Elder]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Sacrificial Warrior". When this card is Summoned, destroy all Beast-Warrior-Type monsters on the field. If this card is not sent to the Graveyard for 3 Battle Phases, inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

 

[spoiler=Lore: Sacrificial Warrior]

You must pay 100 Life Points to activate this card. If this card is sent to the Graveyard toss a coin. If your opponent calls correctly, Tribute Summon 1 "Vampire Elder" from your hand to the field. Then destroy this card.

 

 

[ragnarok1945]

Beast Warrior should be Beast-Warrior

 

150 burn is virtually nothing, at least make that burn bigger, like up to 700ish or something

 

7/10

[Squirrel Girl]

There are some ocg errors. Pic is good and effect is a bit OPed imo. This card gets a 7/10 from me until you have fixed your ocg

 

Ocg fix:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Sacrificial Warrior". When this card is Summoned, destroy all Beast-Warrior-Type monsters on the field. If this card is not sent to the Graveyard for 3 Battle Phases, inflict 150 damage to your opponent.

 

 

 

By the way, where you get the pic?

[CARLCGL]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by 1 "Sacrificial Warrior" When this card is Summoned, destroy all Beast Warrior-Type monsters on the field. If this card is not sent to the Graveyard for 3 Battle Phases inflict 200 Life Points from your opponent.

[Quiksilver]

yeah...this card needs some OCG help...and I'm happy to provide. Heres my redone version of the effect-"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing one "Sacrifical Warrior". When this card is Summoned, destroy all Beast Warrior-Type monsters on the field. After three turns, if this card has not been sent to the Graveyard, inflict 150 points of damage to your opponents Life Points."

 

Okay, now on to the effect. Why would you destroy all Beast Warriors...oh. I get it now. Werewolves, right? Anyways, I think 150 points makes that part of the effect a little UPed, you should probably raise it up to 500.

 

GRADE

7/10 For Originality

9/10 For Playability

7/10 For OCG

9/10 For Relevant Pic /4 = 8/10

[Diaboli Mors]

There are some ocg errors. Pic is good and effect is a bit OPed imo. This card gets a 7/10 from me until you have fixed your ocg

 

Ocg fix:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Sacrificial Warrior". When this card is Summoned' date=' destroy all Beast-Warrior-Type monsters on the field. If this card is not sent to the Graveyard for 3 Battle Phases, inflict 150 damage to your opponent.

 

 

 

By the way, where you get the pic?

[/quote']

 

Thx for the ocg help i got the pic from imageshack

 

 

yeah...this card needs some OCG help...and I'm happy to provide. Heres my redone version of the effect-"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing one "Sacrifical Warrior". When this card is Summoned' date=' destroy all Beast Warrior-Type monsters on the field. After three turns, if this card has not been sent to the Graveyard, inflict 150 points of damage to your opponents Life Points."

 

Okay, now on to the effect. Why would you destroy all Beast Warriors...oh. I get it now. Werewolves, right? Anyways, I think 150 points makes that part of the effect a little UPed, you should probably raise it up to 500.

 

GRADE

7/10 For Originality

9/10 For Playability

7/10 For OCG

9/10 For Relevant Pic /4 = 8/10

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Yep Werewolves thx for the ocg help

[Squirrel Girl]

Ok and no problem for the ocg fix

[The Great Wolf Sif]

alright now the Beast-Warrior Destruction just flat out hurts me.

But it's about time somebody has done that.(in escense Called for.)

But raise the burn effect to 500 or something of the sort.

 

Any ways a good card 8/10

{note}should have "Sacrifice Warrior" with it in the same post helps with card judging or at least mine anyway.

[Squirrel Girl]

Yea it will help if you have Sacrifice Warrior in this thread

[Diaboli Mors]

Alright ill get that posted as soon as i can

[Squirrel Girl]

Ok that be good

[Canadian]

Its a Spellcaster?

Level 9?

Random ATK/DEF,

Generically Random Effects,

500 Burn for waiting 3 turns? Your doing it wrong.

Image made me gag.

[Quiksilver]

Wait a second, Canadian, how can attack and defense be random?

[Squirrel Girl]

ATK / DEF cant be random ^^ He just think so

[Diaboli Mors]

Its a Spellcaster?

Level 9?

Random ATK/DEF' date='

Generically Random Effects,

500 Burn for waiting 3 turns? Your doing it wrong.

Image made me gag.

[/quote']

 

Random effects are my thing dude and i am not doing it wrong im doing it my way. And if you're so ingenious then why don't you come up with a solution

[Canadian]

Sacrificial Warrior has so many errors I'm going to bother to post them all.

 

But I will say this, if you are going to make a synchro, don't forget "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters" or any extra specifications that you want because it really bothers me.

[Diaboli Mors]

Sacrificial Warrior has so many errors I'm going to bother to post them all.

 

But I will say this' date=' if you are going to make a synchro, don't forget "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters" or any extra specifications that you want because it really bothers me.

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Umm...What?

 

What errors?

[Diaboli Mors]

~BUMP~

[RAEGING D0GKING]

Inflicting 500 Damage isnt enoguh.

Maybe 1500.

And to activate the second card is enogh too

maybe 500.

9/10