My newest set the four star's (it's still in progress please rate though)

[Omenhiikoyashi]

So these are mainly my Ocean Star cards but more are on there way and yes i do know that some of the pics might be over used and everything but you might like'em with the effects i gave them. all my image credit goes to google images. So here they are.

 

[spoiler=ruby dragon]

Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by remove 10 FIRE monsters from yuor Graveyard from play. When this card is Summoned discard your entire hand and inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent. When this card is Summoned Special Summon 3 Level 4 or lower FIRE monsters from your Deck. Once per turn you may inflict 700 points of Damage to your opponent, this card cannot attack this turn. During each of your End Phases send 2 FIRE monsters to the Graveyard, if you cannot then destroy this card. This card is uneffected by monster effects.

 

 

[spoiler=dragon of creation]

Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 5 monster you control. When this card is Summoned return all cards in both players' hand, field, and Graveyard other than the Tributed monsters, each player gains 300 Life Points for each card returned. Increase the ATK of this card by 400 for every card returned by it's effect. Send this card to the Graveyard during the End Phase of the turn is was Summoned.

 

 

[spoiler=serpent guardian]

Lore: This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 1 monster with "Ocean Star" in it's name. When this card is Summoned you may add 1 monster with "Ocean Star" in it's name to your hand from your Deck. As long as this card reamains face-up on your side of the field your opponent cannot select another WATER monster as an attack target.

 

 

[spoiler=blizzard knight]

Lore: When this card destroy's a monster on your opponent's side of the field, destroy one Spell or Trap on your opponent's side of the field after the damage calculation's. When this card is destroyed you may add 1 Level 5 or lower WATER monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=magma dragon]

Lore: If this card is Tribute Summoned, the Tribute monsters must FIRE. When this card destroy's a monster on your opponent's side, send 1 FIRE monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. Once per turn you may discard 2 cards from your hand and infict 600 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard you may add 1 "Bakhinoyusidin, Ruby Dragon of the Volcano Star" from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=wanderer]

 

 

[spoiler=glacier dargon]

Lore: If this card is Tribute Summoned, the Tribute monsters must WATER. When this card deals damage to your opponent draw a card from your deck until you draw a WATER monster and send it to the Graveyard, all other cards go to your hand. Decrease the ATK of all monsters on your opponent's side of the field by 100 for each WATER monster in your Graveyard. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard you may add 1 "Ryuzykyga,Sapphire Dragon of the Ocean Star" from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=submerge sorcerer]

 

 

[spoiler=aqua spirit]

 

 

[spoiler=lord of the ocean star]

Lore: 1 WATER Tuner + 1 or more WATER non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Summoned destroy all cards other cards on the field this card cannot attack this turn. Once per turn you may remove 1 WATER monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 WATER monster whose Level is equal to or less than the removed monster from your Deck. Once per turn Tribute 1 WATER monster on your side of the field and increase your Life Points equal to half of the Tributed monster original ATK.

 

 

[spoiler=sapphire dragon]

Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 10 WATER monsters from your Graveyard from play. When this card is Summoned discard your entire hand and draw 5 cards. This card can attack all monster on the field once each. During each of your End Phase discard 2 cards from your hand, if you cannot destroy this card. This card is uneffected by Spell cards.

 

[ragnarok1945]

only the 2nd pic is overused, the rest are fine in that aspect

 

for the first one I'd modify this effect "During each of your End Phases send 2 FIRE monsters to the Graveyard, if you cannot then destroy this card." <---change 2 to 1, you've lost enough FIRE monsters to summon this card as it is, plus you need to say send the FIRE monsters FROM WHERE

 

change may to can

 

the same is true for the last card, just change it to discard ONE card from your hand during the end phase given the summoning requirement

 

8/10

[RAEGING D0GKING]

Second pic is really Overused.

And yes change it from 2 to 1.

 

8.2/10

[White Hollow]

Second pic is really Overused.

And yes change it from 2 to 1.

 

8.2/10

 

they said it, I kinda like them....

8.1/10