My Archetype, Pirates (I fixed the pictures)

[FSBolthof]

Hey everyone,

 

Here is my new archetype, The Pirates. I got my inspiration from the Six Samurai, so you may find some of it back in my picutes. Please enjoy and rate.

 

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Lore: This card cannot be Set and when it is Summoned, it is put in Defense Position. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can return 1 Monster Card on your opponent's side of the field to his/her hand. While you control "Pirate - Lady Cannoneer", once per turn you can choose 1 of the following effects:

* Discard 1 card in your opponent's hand to the Graveyard.

* Look at your opponent's hand.

 

Lore: When this card is destroyed by battle, destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. While you control "Pirate - Lady Chief Officer", once per turn you can choose 1 of the following effects:

* Destroy 1 face-down card on your opponent's side of the field.

* Look at all face-down card on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Lore: When this card is destroyed by battle, you can remove the upper 3 cards from your opponent's Graveyard from play. While you control "Pirate - Lady Warrior", once per turn you can choose 1 of the following effects:

* Look at the upper 2 card of your opponent's Deck.

* Remove the upper card of your opponent's Deck from play

 

 

Lore: Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face-up "Pirate" monster you control, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster destroys an opponent's monster by battle, draw 1 card. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)

 

 

 

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I hope you enjoyed it and please rate and comment

[RAEGING D0GKING]

Nice pics were did you get them?

I like the effects.

Nice and simple.

9.2/10

[FSBolthof]

Thanks, these pictures are from genzoman (well all the pirates are, not all Spell and Trap cards)

[ragnarok1945]

all the short effects are suited for the low levels

 

though the pics ARE starting to get a bit overused (it's like the 5th time I've seen them used in 2 days)

 

only Battle Between Pirates and Crows Nest I'd add some more effects to, but that's it

 

9/10

[Quiksilver]

I like the whole Gold Counter idea, but Pirates are a archetype I have seen before. The pictures, I've seen too. Heck, I even used those pictures, in my Pantheon Gods set. No OCG errors, though, so I'll give you that. Give the first two Spell Cards more effects, and then these cards would be a pretty good set.

 

GRADE

6/10 For Originality

+9/10 For Playability

+10/10 For OCG

+9/10 For Relevant Pics /4= 8.5/10

[FSBolthof]

Thanks for all your rating, but from all those uses of these pictures, was the best, maybe mine?? (I know it is a bit selfish to ask) and I have changed the Spell Cards a bit.

[happybaby9]

I like the cards and the pictures.

Only, it think it's changed to Defense Position and not put

And top 2 cards and not upper 2 cards.

I do like the cards and their effects 9/10

[LourDeath]

these cards i have worked on... also cred by GENZOMAN

 

^.^

completed this set already....

[FSBolthof]

So who is going to rate next?

[RAEGING D0GKING]

Crows Nest, Pirate Island and Splitting the Money all have bad pictures.

Maybe find better pics

Also theres already a card called

[FSBolthof]

Yeah I was already thinking of giving better pictures and I didn't know about Treasure Map, I'll change it later

[LourDeath]

gosh my set of pirates... XD

[Chaos Impact™]

very nice cards i myself am a fan of genzoman, the set seems interesting, gripping and yet devastating in the right situation

-the pics may be a bit overused

-everything (ocg, pics ect..) seems good

Grade A/A*

[darkfire soul]

very good 10/10:)