Welcome the Nightmare

[Malik37]

Just wanted some feedback on cards I created for a contest and set I am trying to finish called "Welcome to Nightmareville". I apologize for the set name. It was the only one I could think of at the time. If the set concept has been done, sorry again. I tried to find creepy, horrific, and disgusting pictures to match the theme. As always, thanks for constructive criticism.

 

Here are 12 of the cards:

 

Thank you Bloodrun for helping me fix Nightnotic Trance.

I have only made 21 cards so far. The rest could be found in this link:

Welcome to Nightmareville

[Bloodrun]

well well well these are very good, one thing your nightonic trance card, you dont need that extra space between the body of the text, and the actuall effects =) 8/10 8)

[Malik37]

well well well these are very good' date=' one thing your nightonic trance card, you dont need that extra space between the body of the text, and the actuall effects =) 8/10 8)

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Thank you. For a long time, I have been wondering about that detail of the description. Do I just put it direct under the ":" or just continue it from the ":"?

[Bloodrun]

well well well these are very good' date=' one thing your nightonic trance card, you dont need that extra space between the body of the text, and the actuall effects =) 8/10 8)

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Thank you. For a long time, I have been wondering about that detail of the description. Do I just put it direct under the ":" or just continue it from the ":"?

 

here is an example

 

you go to the mall, and you find out that there are ORANGES for sale, you can do this:

-Buy the ORANGES

-Steal the ORANGES and eat

-Steal the ORANGES, go back into the store, and sell them to the store owner

 

:lol: hoped i helped =)

[Malik37]

well well well these are very good' date=' one thing your nightonic trance card, you dont need that extra space between the body of the text, and the actuall effects =) 8/10 8)

[/quote']

 

Thank you. For a long time, I have been wondering about that detail of the description. Do I just put it direct under the ":" or just continue it from the ":"?

 

here is an example

 

you go to the mall, and you find out that there are ORANGES for sale, you can do this:

-Buy the ORANGES

-Steal the ORANGES and eat

-Steal the ORANGES, go back into the store, and sell them to the store owner

 

:lol: hoped i helped =)

 

Yes, that helped a lot. I fix that error as soon as possible. Thank you.

[Bloodrun]

well well well these are very good' date=' one thing your nightonic trance card, you dont need that extra space between the body of the text, and the actuall effects =) 8/10 8)

[/quote']

 

Thank you. For a long time, I have been wondering about that detail of the description. Do I just put it direct under the ":" or just continue it from the ":"?

 

here is an example

 

you go to the mall, and you find out that there are ORANGES for sale, you can do this:

-Buy the ORANGES

-Steal the ORANGES and eat

-Steal the ORANGES, go back into the store, and sell them to the store owner

 

:lol: hoped i helped =)

 

Yes, that helped a lot. I fix that error as soon as possible. Thank you.

 

oh ok, and your welcome, any more question? just ask =)

[II DEFiiNED II]

Agreed, I like them, a lot, 8.7/10

[Dark Supreme]

7.7/10..its not that cards that give me the nightemares...its the OCG..JK but it need a little work

[Junk Raver]

LMAO pyramid head lol i love them all ^_^

[Malik37]

Agreed' date=' I like them, a lot, 8.7/10

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Thank you for the rating. Once I improve in OCG hopefully I can get 9 or above.

 

7.7/10..its not that cards that give me the nightemares...its the OCG..JK but it need a little work

 

That was priceless. Thanks for the advice.

 

LMAO pyramid head lol i love them all ^_^

 

Thanks man. I really appreciate that. Though, it is going to be hard to beat your Disk set. I love that holo card you made for that set.