Neoshadow155 Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 [align=center]New set after a while not the "awesome" or "epic" type Enjoy it though! ~Neo [spoiler=LUNR-EN001][spoiler=Lore]This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Order's Eclipse". You must also offer monsters whose total Level equals 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. When this card is successfully Ritual Summoned your opponent discards 2 cards. If your opponent does not have any cards in their hand send the top 2 cards of their Deck to the Graveyard. During your Battle Phase you can Tribute 1 monster to change the Battle Position of 1 monster. When this card is destroyed by battle Special Summon 1 "Lunaris Offense" monster in Attack Position or 1 "Lunaris Defense" monster in Defense Position from your hand. [spoiler=LUNR-EN002] [spoiler=LUNR-EN003 UPDATED!][spoiler=Lore]When this card is in face-up Attack Position when you receive damage the damage you would have taken is halved. When this card is destroyed by battle all monster's on your side of the field cannot be destroyed by battle until the End Phase (Damage calculation is applied normally) [spoiler=LUNR-EN004 NEW!][spoiler=Lore]During your Battle Phase this card can destroy 1 of your opponent's cards on their side of the field, field, discard 1 card from their hand, or send the top card of their Deck to the Graveyard. When this effect is activated this card cannot attack and is changed to Defense Position until your next Battle Phase. When this card is destroyed by battle destroy one Spell or Trap on your opponent's side of the field. Image Credit:DeviantART WanderleyJazin Kay[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 Seems nice.Not op or up.9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neoshadow155 Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 Seems nice.Not op or up.9.6/10 Thanks tried to keep it balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 I can't see the actual cards, but don't use a comma. Use a hyphen instead.Crazy person, lovely madman= Crazy person - Lovely madman. I'd need to see Lunaris O and D to rate all the way. Decent so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 only 1 thing I'd change in the ritual monster: the ritual summoning effect make an alternative effect, in case your opponent doesn't have 2 cards to discard 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neoshadow155 Posted April 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 I can't see the actual cards' date=' but don't use a comma. Use a hyphen instead.Crazy person, lovely madman= Crazy person - Lovely madman. I'd need to see Lunaris O and D to rate all the way. Decent so far.[/quote'] Well, i did just start, but i already started on one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 A delinquent duo just for summoning it? wow. This card feels OP'ed. Please specify where the Offence/Defense monster gest SS'd from when this card is destroyed. If its from your Graveyard, this card can just keep SSing himself. If its hand, I'd need to see more of your cards to just its OP/UP-ness, and if its from your Deck, God help us all. Still, I like your creativity. And I think the image is really cool. Good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neoshadow155 Posted April 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 A delinquent duo just for summoning it? wow. This card feels OP'ed. Please specify where the Offence/Defense monster gest SS'd from when this card is destroyed. If its from your Graveyard' date=' this card can just keep SSing himself. If its hand, I'd need to see more of your cards to just its OP/UP-ness, and if its from your Deck, God help us all. Still, I like your creativity. And I think the image is really cool. Good work.[/quote'] Oh let me fix that, and thanks for the suggestion really helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 So your archtype is going to be somewhat like morphtronics. Gaining effects based on position. Nice. As for Edge. I think the first effect is a bit too OP'ed for this card. I'd give it like 200-300 ATK or something. Just imagine, equip it with mist body and just start attacking everything, you gain life points left right and centre. What I'd do is either change his stats, give it a drawback (deffinitly take out the other effect if you are using just this one), or have it say "All damage you take is halved" instead of just gained instead. Just my opinions, good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neoshadow155 Posted April 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 So your archtype is going to be somewhat like morphtronics. Gaining effects based on position. Nice. As for Edge. I think the first effect is a bit too OP'ed for this card. I'd give it like 200-300 ATK or something. Just imagine' date=' equip it with mist body and just start attacking everything, you gain life points left right and centre. What I'd do is either change his stats, give it a drawback (deffinitly take out the other effect if you are using just this one), or have it say "All damage you take is halved" instead of just gained instead. Just my opinions, good work.[/quote'] Sure it's just an opinion, but opinions work :PI agree I did think he was OP'ed, but ,hey, not much trouble just seeing how to fix it right?Well i tried to do an accuracy one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neoshadow155 Posted April 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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