RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 [align=center] War Beast - Hakoon Effect : You can discard this card to prevent your monster from being destroyed by battle (Damge calculation is applied normally.) While this card is in your Graveyard and you control no cards, you can Special Summon this card from your graveyard. Once per turn you can pay 1000 Life Points to add 1 Monster from your Deck to your hand. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon you can pay 1000 Life Points to change the battle position of all monster on the field. Image Credit - Alcander[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neoshadow155 Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 "If this card is used for a Synchro Summon you can pay 1000 Life Points to change the battle position of all monster on the field."I think you meant to put "can" there because it didn't make sense without it.graveyard=Graveyardit's decent Tuner if it was real I might use it or side-deck it.Good Tuner defense8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 "If this card is used for a Synchro Summon you can pay 1000 Life Points to change the battle position of all monster on the field."I think you meant to put "can" there because it didn't make sense without it.graveyard=Graveyardit's decent Tuner if it was real I might use it or side-deck it.Good Tuner defense8.5/10 k thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 Almost everything about this card is perfect. The image, the grammar, and the overall idea. Great job :D Except you made a typo when you spelt "damage". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 Almost everything about this card is perfect. The image' date=' the grammar, and the overall idea. Great job :D Except you made a typo when you spelt "damage".[/quote']Thanks.fixing now.Whats your rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 graveyard should be Graveyard OCG looks fine situational, but it's still good for quick synchro summoning, so I'll give it 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 graveyard should be Graveyard OCG looks fine situational' date=' but it's still good for quick synchro summoning, so I'll give it 8.6/10[/quote'] ....Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 [align=center] War Beast - Hakoon Effect :You can discard this card to prevent your monster from being destroyed by battle (Damge calculation is applied normally.) While this card is in your Graveyard and you control no cards' date=' you can Special Summon this card from your graveyard. Once per turn you can pay 1000 Life Points to add 1 Monster from your Deck to your hand.[/b'] If this card is used for a Synchro Summon you can pay 1000 Life Points to change the battle position of all monster on the field. Image Credit - Alcander[/align] Bolded part is where I think you went wrong.Made it waaaaaaaaay to OP'ed. Still great art and good work. Off-topic: lol @ rag for saying situational. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 How is it OP if I can Special Summon it from the grave?Look at Plaguspreader, Level Eater and those cards.They are even easier to summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 How is it OP if I can Special Summon it from the grave?Look at Plaguspreader' date=' Level Eater and those cards.They are even easier to summon.[/quote'] lol @ Level Eater. But at least you can't spam 3 from the Graveyard each turn. If you don't see how this card is Overpowered, theres something wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Effect is 10/10. Pic 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Effect is 7/10. Pic 10/10fix'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 Lots of errors.Way to OP.plz look at a real card before you make one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 Lots of errors.Way to OP.plz look at a real card before you make one. Wow....You must be an idiot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 Lots of errors.Way to OP.plz look at a real card before you make one. Wow....You must be an idiot. wow....you can say that kinda stuff on mine? but then when i do it bak u get cut? sad much? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Lua, if I were you, I'd really get rid of the 1000 LP for any monster from your Deck. That turns this into a maximum of 5 turns for Exodia. (who still uses that >___>). I still love this card though. PS: This isn't spamming Icy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Ya ill change it to add a Beast-Type monster instead and ill change it to 1500 LP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glitch Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 at the end, monster should be monsters cuz u said "all" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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