My first card combo!

[Hallucinagen]

Here's my first card chain, any criticism and negative rates are welcomed, nothin tops honesty, cheers........... but just remember that the last 3 cards are meant to be really rare.........

 

Effect:

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Endless Inferno". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a tribute from the field or your hand. Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, it gains 300 ATK. While you have 1 or fewer cards in your hand, this card gains 500 ATK. Also, If this is the only monster you control, negate the effects of Flip Effect Monsters it destroys by battle. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, your opponent draws cards until their hand has 7 cards.

 

Effect:

"Furious Fire Fiend" + "Demoness, Heir to Hell's Bloodline" + "Crimson Beast of the Red Star"

Increase this card's ATK by 200 for every FIRE and WIND monster that is face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Tuner monster you control to Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard with the same Attribute and Level as the Tributed monster.You can Special Summon an opponent's monster that is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by this card as a result of battle to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position.You can Tribute this card, with any 3 other "Jagged Tempest" monsters on your side of the field and pay 3000 Life points to Special Summon 1 "Volkane, Son of One Thousand Suns" from your hand.

 

Hell will open, and one thousand white hot suns of darkness will fall to Earth and merge together, summoning a soul dissolving nightmare of reality beyond the wildest imagination, the galaxy will distort, stars will explode, the ground will quake, the sky will melt, while time and space intertwines and corrodes, for the son of one thousand suns will dawn this insignificant planet only to show case meerly a fraction of the power that is, the brother of pain and the father of destruction, Satans mentor, the evil God of Infinite horror........ Volkane.

Effect:

You must offer 4 Tributes with "Jagged Tempest" in thier name to Tribute Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, it is sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase. While this card is face-up on the Field, it cannot be targeted by Spells, Traps, or Monsters (Except other god Cards) that designate a target. By offering 1 Monster on your Field as a Tribute, all Monsters on your opponent's Field are destroyed. When Slifer, the Sky Dragon, Obelisk the Tormentor, and the Winged Dragon of Ra are sacrificed to Volkane Son of One Thousand Suns, it gains infinite attack and defense. and cannot be destroyed as a result of spells, traps, monster effects or battle in any way for the rest of the duel, if this card attacks during your next battle phase, all spell, trap, and monster cards (including God cards) on the field are destroyed (Except this card), your opponents life points become 0, and your Life points become 1, (this effect cannot be negated).

[Sákura Haruno]

Too many vanilla cards (cards with no effect). it shows that you aren't really creative, but everyone is somewhat creative so just give more of your cards effects. i like that you gave them flavorful text though (most people just put one sentence in their vanilla card's description). Furious fire fiend is overly underpowered(up'ed) and your fusion and ritual monsters are overpowered(op'ed) I like the pics though and the effects are pretty cool.Volkane is op'ed as well.Good for a newbie but it could be better. 5.5/10

[A.Prime]

Too many vanilla cards (cards with no effect). it shows that you aren't really creative' date=' but everyone is somewhat creative so just give more of your cards effects. i like that you gave them flavorful text though (most people just put one sentence in their vanilla card's description). Furious fire fiend is overly underpowered(up'ed) and your fusion and ritual monsters are overpowered(op'ed) I like the pics though and the effects are pretty cool.Volkane is op'ed as well.Good for a newbie but it could be better. 5.5/10

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I agree...

5.5/10

[Shadow Soul]

Too many vanilla cards (cards with no effect). it shows that you aren't really creative' date=' but everyone is somewhat creative so just give more of your cards effects. i like that you gave them flavorful text though (most people just put one sentence in their vanilla card's description). Furious fire fiend is overly underpowered(up'ed) and your fusion and ritual monsters are overpowered(op'ed) I like the pics though and the effects are pretty cool.Volkane is op'ed as well.Good for a newbie but it could be better. 5.5/10

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Aren't really creative? no offence, but didn't you create a fly swatter card, lol, there's nothin wrong with vanilla cards, especially this guys, creative as dude, they're all just about right power wise if they're meant to be rare, there's counter effects in there, nice, Volkane is a bit OP'ed but he is meant to be 12 star god, 9/10!

[Sákura Haruno]

A Fly Swatter isn't creative? then show me another Fly Swatter card. I admit their creative for vanillas... but their still vanillas. I would just make MORE effect cards. Vanilla cards aren't bad if they aren't MOSTLY vanillas and these cards are MOSTLY vanillas.