Neoshadow155 Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 [align=center]Well felt like making LIGHT monsters using your opponent's monsters as jailers so well here Machine/EffectATK: ? DEF: ?When this card is Normal Summoned all monsters on your opponent's side of the field are destroyed. This card gains 900 ATK and DEF for every monster destroyed by this effect. When this card is destroyed by battle your opponent gains Life Points equal to this card's ATK. During your Battle Phase by removing this card from play while it's in your Graveyard all monsters on your side of the field gain 300 ATK and DEF. THE STEPS:1. Destroyed = Put to jail2. Gaining ATK and DEF = Safer Community3. Opponent gains LP = Jail break4. Removing equal + ATK and DEF = Payback Image Credit: Jazin Kay Enjoy![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cursed Reaction Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Comma after Normal Summoned. Let's see: three tributes, up to five monsters so 4500 ATK max. Although, if you look at it, it can end a Duel in a split second so it really doesn't matter that your opponent's can gain Life Points so potentially Oped. There is no reason to add the last bit at all unless you would bother using it when your opponent has 1 to 3 monsters.. The chances of a possible comeback is unlikely. Good picture and quite good effect, although I wouldn't personally use it. 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neoshadow155 Posted April 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 I'm thinking of making it not be able to attack an opponent directly for a drawback...,but im not sure how much damage it could do by attacking a monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Let's start with the level.Change it. Gerenally, monsters with level 9-12 are either special summon monsters, or they can be special summoned by their own effect. Especially Level 12. I suggest you change it to lvl 8. "When this card is destroyed by battle your opponent gains Life Points equal to this card's ATK." <- since it's ATK is undefined, it'd be 0, so either make this effect happen before it's sent to graveyard or remove it cause it does nothing. Last effect is good for LS. o.o Other then that, it's good.7.7/10Comma after Normal Summoned. Let's see: three tributes' date=' up to five monsters so 4500 ATK max. Although, if you look at it, it can end a Duel in a split second so it really doesn't matter that your opponent's can gain Life Points so potentially Oped. There is no reason to add the last bit at all unless you would bother using it when your opponent has 1 to 3 monsters.. The chances of a possible comeback is unlikely. Good picture and quite good effect, although I wouldn't personally use it. 7.7/10[/quote'] and what do you mean 3 tributes? O.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Creative effect. I do like the idea.It doesnt seem that much OP.I liek the card 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Not bad. It actually feels Underpowered. Also, in agreement with Jay, change its level to 8. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 it's not OPed, more along the UPed end because all it really does on the field is have an atk/def determining effect, I was hoping it could do more it IS a lv12 monster after all 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 as soon as I saw the card level, i automaticaly thought this card was OPed but then i red the effect, and den i failed at my perceptions. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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