anti-mage

[taekaba123]

Magina-The Anti-Mage

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Warrior/Effect

When this card is Normal Summoned remove all Spell counters on the field.Each time a Spellcaster-type monster is summoned gain 300 Life Points.Once per turn, you can pay life points equal to a number of Spell-counters x100 to remove that many counters from the field.This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the paid life points until the End Phase of this turn.

 

ATK/2800 DEF/2500

 

 

 

any OCG errors?

feel free to comment ^^

[michael91]

nice

[taekaba123]

thanks!

 

Bump!!!

[Cody Frost]

Magina-The Anti-Mage Light

********

Warrior/Effect

When this card is Normal Summoned remove all Spell counters on the field. When a Spellcaster-type monster is summoned gain 300 Life Points. Once per turn you can pay equal to the Spell-counters on the field x100 to remove all Spell-counters' date='this card gains ATK and DEF equal to the life point paid.[/b']

 

ATK/2800 DEF/2500

 

The concept is decent and has the potential to wreak Spell Counter Decks.

There are a few error I bolded that could be re-written. It could be re-written better like:

 

Name: Magina-The Anti-Mage

******** LIGHT

Warrior/Effect

When this card is Normal Summoned remove all Spell counters on the field. Each time a Spellcaster-type monster is summoned gain 300 Life Points. Once per turn, you can pay life points equal to a number of Spell Counters on the field x 100 to remove that many counters from the field. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the amount of paid life points until the End Phase of this turn.

 

ATK/2800 DEF/2500

 

-.- A bit wordy? Yes. But it makes the grammar more official (although I do believe this could be re-written much better than this). Meh, it's late and I'm getting tired...

 

Wow this is my first post in a LONG time

o.O

[Uchiha Sasuke XII]

Magina-The Anti-Mage Light

********

Warrior/Effect

When this card is Normal Summoned remove all Spell counters on the field. When a Spellcaster-type monster is summoned gain 300 Life Points. Once per turn you can pay equal to the Spell-counters on the field x100 to remove all Spell-counters' date='this card gains ATK and DEF equal to the life point paid.[/b']

 

ATK/2800 DEF/2500

 

The concept is decent and has the potential to wreak Spell Counter Decks.

There are a few error I bolded that could be re-written. It could be re-written better like:

 

Name: Magina-The Anti-Mage

******** LIGHT

Warrior/Effect

When this card is Normal Summoned remove all Spell counters on the field. Each time a Spellcaster-type monster is summoned gain 300 Life Points. Once per turn, you can pay life points equal to a number of Spell Counters on the field x 100 to remove that many counters from the field. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the amount of paid life points until the End Phase of this turn.

 

ATK/2800 DEF/2500

 

-.- A bit wordy? Yes. But it makes the grammar more official (although I do believe this could be re-written much better than this). Meh, it's late and I'm getting tired...

 

Wow this is my first post in a LONG time

o.O

 

Should be "life points paid" But it is a good effect.

[taekaba123]

thanks Wolfy eddy