A card I made

[Gyarados]

I'd post all 50 something of my cards but im to lazy to do all the work so here is just 1 card:

http://s245.photobucket.com/albums/gg57/Thunder_Fish/?action=view&current=82mouth_jjpgset1ROFLset2150typeZomb.jpg[/font]

[Junk Raver]

Not bad for your first card, obviously theres loads wrong with it, but still good for a beginner ^_^

[arpeejajo]

It's okay, probably would be better if I knew what a shadow ghoul was. 6/10

[Yankee]

grammar problem: Flip needs to be FLIP:, all summoning conditions must be capitalizd, like, Special Summon. When you are saying the name of a card, you must put " at the beggining and end of the card name, like "Shadow Ghoul".

As for the pic, it doesent quite fit, so see if you can resize it. plus, 1000 atk and def for a level 1 is way to much.

Well, this is your first card i belive, good for a first, not nearly as many errors that are usually seen. 7.5/10

Good job ^_^

please show me more.

[Instinct]

i like the effect! there are a few errors but it's still great! good job!

[Professor Cobra]

The pic is good, effect is okay. Overpowered. Lower ATK and DEF to 100, not 1000. 7/10

[Gyarados]

Actually that was not my first card at all, here is my first card I ever made:

http://s245.photobucket.com/albums/gg57/Thunder_Fish/?action=view&current=buster_bladerjpgset1ROFLset2125type.jpg

[arpeejajo]

That one has some OCG problems too but it's pretty good.