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"Halo Combat Evolved" rate and coment


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This thread will consist of any thing from any halo game.

i will post some cards but fill free to post ur own halo cards.

[spoiler= halo combat evolved]

[spoiler= monster]507749.jpg[spoiler=Lore]Ones per turn this card can not be destroyed.

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Okay, you did a pretty good job. I don't see many new members with such good cards. They aren't perfect of course. But still, good work.

 

To the specific problems:

You should avoid any writings in your pictures.

The first card is a bit too strong. Lower the ATK a bit, I'd recommend.

To the second card: It's a nice, offensive normal monster.

I have two problems with it:

It's a bitstronger than it should be, too. Lower the DEF to 2600 or 2700 and the ATK to 2450 or 2500, maybe. Even then, it's pretty strong.

And the description sounds a little stupid. ^^;

Maybe "They're very brutal and aggressive warriors who don't hesitate to demontrate their immense power on innocent beings.". I don't know the story good enough to know if that's correct. xD

 

But overall; way to go!

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ocg errors:

Once per turn, when this card would be destroyed, it is not.

and

This card can only be tribute summoned or set by tributing 1 "Elite" monster.

I think that's what your going for, or maybe:

This card cannot be tribute summoned or set. It can only be special summoned by tributing 1 "Elite" monster.

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