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[align=center]First, let me explain how the Prizes thing works. The first 2 people to post a GOOD review of these sets (that means at least a paragraph long, no linebreaks!) will get 20 Points or a +rep.

 

Prizes:

 

13/4/10

Azrael - One +rep

 

18/4/10

crypted - One +rep

 

Crashing Torrent is a 13-card set based around 'Ice Barrier' support and Sea Serpent support.

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN000 Pikeman of Daedalus (Secret Rare)]

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You can remove from play 1 Sea Serpent-Type monster on the field to Special Summon this card from your hand or Deck. There can only be 1 face-up 'Pikeman of Daedalus' on the field. Once per turn you can send this card from the field to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 WATER Synchro monster from your Extra Deck during the End Phase. If this effect is activated, pay Life Points equal to the combined Levels of this card and the summoned monster x200.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN001 Shrapna, Sentry of the Ice Barrier (Ultra Rare)]

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You can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 'Inner Warden of the Ice Barrier' from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. This card can only be used for the Synchro Summon of a WATER Synchro monster.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN002 Thunder-Shock!!! (Ultra Rare)]

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Activate only when there are 2 or more 'Ice Barrier' monsters on the field. Pay 2500 Life Points. Destroy all cards on the field. Both players discard their hands and draw 5 cards.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN003 Daedalus, Serpent King of the Oceans (Ultra Rare)]

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1 Tuner + 1 or more WATER non-Tuner monsters

This card can only be Synchro Summoned when there are exactly 6 WATER monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn you can discard any number of cards from your hand to remove from play an equal amount of cards from your opponent's Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN004 Underwater Ambush (Ultra Rare)]

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Negate the Special Summon of a monster and remove it from play.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN005 Feidlimid, Huntress of the Ice Barrier (Secret Rare)]

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1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower 'Ice Barrier' monster from your hand or Deck. It's effect(s) are negated.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN006 Levia, Knight of Daedalus (Secret Rare)]

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You can pay 1500 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand or Deck. When this card has attacked or been attacked, you can send it from the field to the Graveyard to Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or lower Sea Serpent-type monsters from your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck. This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN007 Elite Lancer of Daedalus (Ultra Rare)]

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1 Tuner + 'Pikeman of Daedalus'

There can only be 1 face-up 'Elite Lancer of Daedalus' on the field. This card cannot be summoned by the effect of 'Pikeman of Daedalus'. Once per turn, you can remove from play any number of WATER monsters in your Graveyard to destroy an equal number of cards on the field. If you activate this effect, remove this card from play during your next Standby Phase.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN008 Pijlstaartrog, Manta of the Ice Barrier (Ultra Rare)]

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If there is a face-up 'Ice Barrier' monster on the field, you can add this card to your hand. This card can only be used for the Synchro Summon of a Sea Serpent-Type monster. When this card is removed from the field it is removed from play.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN009 Noxus, Seal of the Ice Barrier (Ultra Rare)]

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by paying 1000 Life Points after summoning an 'Ice Barrier' Synchro monster. If an 'Ice Barrier' monster on the field would be destroyed, you can pay 500 Life Points instead. This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN010 Struikrover, Trickster of the Ice Barrier (Ultra Rare)]

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You can pay 1500 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 'Ice Barrier' monster from your Graveyard. It's effect(s) are negated and it is removed from play during the End Phase.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN011 Kraken, Renegade of Daedalus (Ultra Rare)]

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1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

If there isn't a face-up Sea Serpent-Type monster on the field, destroy this card. During your End Phase, you can decrease this card's ATK by 700 to destroy 1 card on the field. When this card is destroyed, you take damage equal to this card's current ATK.

 

 

[spoiler=CRTO-EN012 Kronos, Weapon of the Ice Barrier (Secret Rare)]

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'Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier' + 2 'Ice Barrier' monsters

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This card can only be Fusion Summoned by removing the Fusion Material monsters from play (you do not use 'Polymerization'). As long as this card is on the field, other monsters cannot change their battle positions or attack. Unless you pay 500 Life Points, this monster cannot attack. When this card destroys a monster by battle, it is removed from play. When this card is destroyed, destroy all cards on the field.

 

 

 

 

All the images used in the making of these cards were taken from Jazin Kay's fantastic image archive. It's a brilliant archive chock-full of great images that Jazin spent a lot of time compiling. It's well worth a look.[/align]

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Pikeman - Did you mean to be able to get rid of your opponent's Sea Serpent monster to get this guy out? The way it's currently worded you can, and that makes it a little OP.

Shrapna - At Level 4 it would be very hard to use it to get Feidlimid out (you'd need a Level 1 monster), so that kinds messes up the flow of these cards with each other.

Thunder-Shock - There's just too much in it. It would probably be limited or banned upon release. My humble suggestion is either field destruction or hand destruction, not both.

Daedalus - 2 non-tuners...you really like making synchro summoning hard on yourself :P. Also, the effect is mehish because currently you are allowed to look at your opponent's deck and discard specific cards. It might be better if it was off the top (or bottom).

Ambush - Underpowered. I don't think it needs the cost, or at the very least not as big of a cost.

Feidlimid - Generic synchro fodder generation effect. Ice Barriers tend to have more epic effects than that, but it's up to you. Otherwise, it's okay.

Levia - Currently, you are forced to pay LP and summon him as soon as the duel begins. I don't think you meant it that way. The special summon effect is overpowered without some kind of restriction as to the monsters you can pull from your deck (such as level X or lower, etc.).

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Pikeman - Did you mean to be able to get rid of your opponent's Sea Serpent monster to get this guy out? The way it's currently worded you can' date=' and that makes it a little OP.

[b']Sea Serpents aren't very popular deck material, but if your opponent does have one out (an unlikely event) then it takes advantage of that.

Shrapna - At Level 4 it would be very hard to use it to get Feidlimid out (you'd need a Level 1 monster), so that kinds messes up the flow of these cards with each other.

It say 'Inner Warden of the Ice Barrier' - a level 2 non-Tuner. It's meant to get Brionac out quickly.

Thunder-Shock - There's just too much in it. It would probably be limited or banned upon release. My humble suggestion is either field destruction or hand destruction, not both.

I thought the same when making it. I could up the cost, I suppose.

Daedalus - 2 non-tuners...you really like making synchro summoning hard on yourself :P. Also, the effect is mehish because currently you are allowed to look at your opponent's deck and discard specific cards. It might be better if it was off the top (or bottom).

I'll change it to Graveyard, maybe?

Ambush - Underpowered. I don't think it needs the cost, or at the very least not as big of a cost.

Agreed. I'll change it.

Feidlimid - Generic synchro fodder generation effect. Ice Barriers tend to have more epic effects than that, but it's up to you. Otherwise, it's okay.

I agree, to an extent. It's meant to be Brionac support (use it's effect to bring out a Level 1 Tuner).

Levia - Currently, you are forced to pay LP and summon him as soon as the duel begins. I don't think you meant it that way. The special summon effect is overpowered without some kind of restriction as to the monsters you can pull from your deck (such as level X or lower, etc.).

Oops. That's a bad mistake. Thanks for telling me that. I'll add a cost and decrease the number.

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though i'm new (to posting at least) i don't like the effects of Pikeman of Daedalus, i'd be excessively pissed if my opponents was like "HA i'm gonna sacrifice your monster to summon my own without using a trap/spell card with no added effects that hurt me in anyway" well at least thats what i think...

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though i'm new (to posting at least) i don't like the effects of Pikeman of Daedalus' date=' i'd be excessively pissed if my opponents was like "HA i'm gonna sacrifice your monster to summon my own without using a trap/spell card with no added effects that hurt me in anyway" well at least thats what i think...

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I agree with you in a way, but that part of the effect is only useful if the other person is playing a Sea Serpent deck also, which is unlikely given the current state of the game.

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I agree with you in a way' date=' but that part of the effect is only useful if the other person is playing a Sea Serpent deck also, which is unlikely given the current state of the game.

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well i do suppose it could go both ways for the summoning if they don't have the deck for it

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I agree with you in a way' date=' but that part of the effect is only useful if the other person is playing a Sea Serpent deck also, which is unlikely given the current state of the game.

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well i do suppose it could go both ways for the summoning if they don't have the deck for it

 

Thank you for the critique. BUMP. You get a +rep, by the way! :D

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