my frist dark monestar

[Slam Shady]

[align=center]hi , this is my frist dark monestar what do u think ?

 

 

 

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[Code Y.C.M]

wat do u think?!

i think the OCG needs great improving and the grammer but the pic and the name is nice. 4/10

 

check out my first card

[Slam Shady]

lol 4/10 !!

[amnail]

good pic but the ocg is bad and i know bad cos im pretty crap as well so improve gramer and ocg.

[Slam Shady]

what is gramer and ocg ?

[Luna Diviner]

You can even spell grammar,

lets say your spelling SUCKS!!

but you can learn and improve now its not very good and whats a Hadow ?

so 3/10

[Slam Shady]

lol u dont now what is hadow

that's coz u noob lol

[Luna Diviner]

I think you mean't TO Spell Shadow not Hadow and I am reporting you.

[Slam Shady]

lool i now how to spell shadow and hadow

but hadow it's more power then shadow ^^

and soryy about ( noob) word ^^

[Luna Diviner]

Ok I take your word for it but I can't find the word Hadow when I checked Wikipedia.

[Slam Shady]

if u look at street fighter alpha 3 move u well see the dark hadow ^^

[Luna Diviner]

Buts thats like fake,cartoons and games sometimes use Made-up words

[Slam Shady]

ok i well delete Hadow if that make u fell bater

but what should but ? shadow??

[Luna Diviner]

I don't mind I am only tying to help you.

Maybe

Dark Shadow

Dark Lord

Infernal Shadow

Infernal Lord

and make it either a Fiend type or a Zombie type.

[Slam Shady]

what : infrenal : mean ?

 

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i now u r trying to help me coz no 1 like my dark monestar lol -_-

[Luna Diviner]

It means all evil and like hellish and dark thats how I can explain it.

I made the grammar better so here it is--

I also made it less overpowered a bit-

 

Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 50 x the amount of cards in your Deck.

and make it lvl 10

and make the attack 2000 and the def 2000.

Thats how I can help.

[Slam Shady]

thanks 4 help

and i well make a new 1

and i well putit here

[Luna Diviner]

Cool ,I am happy to help,I also made a new card if you want you can check it out.

[Slam Shady]

this is my new 1

see it if there some thing wrong tell me

and i whant to see ur card ^^

[Luna Diviner]

It needs better grammar ,copy and paste this

Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 50 x the amount of cards in your Deck.

and make it around what I said

[Slam Shady]

what about this

[Tefached]

ok first of all every post ive seen you post has horrible spelling this is why 4 yr olds shouldnt be online learn to spell,

[Slam Shady]

wat?

is i say im not so good with english

[Tefached]

what language to do speak

[Slam Shady]

arbic XD