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[KMS] Synchro: Reverse Freeze, Magesta the Sorceress


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[align=center] Just another Idea of a series that came out the top of my head "Reverse Freeze" I originally thought of calling them "Black Ice" but then looked for words that would be better and so I came up with "Reverse Freeze". I may make more depending on how this card goes.

 

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1 DARK Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Spellcaster monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned, Special Summon this card to your opponents field in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot attack, change its Battle Position or be Tributed. Each time your opponent Summons a monster, Decrease this cards ATK by 500 to switch the Summoned monster to Defence Position. While this card is face-up on the field, monsters your opponent controls cannot attack or change their Battle Position. If your opponents Monster Card Zone is full destroy this card.

 

Image Credit: Jazin Kay

 

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When this card is Synchro Summoned, Special Summon this card to your opponents field in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot attack, change its Battle Position or be Tributed. Each time your opponent Summons a monster, Decrease this cards ATK by 500 to switch the Summoned monster to Defence Position. While this card is face-up on the field, monsters your opponent controls cannot attack or change their Battle Position. If your opponents Monster Card Zone is full destroy this card.

 

OCG is almost perfect, save for a few normal grammatical errors (like the missing apostrophe in the phrase "your opponents"). Also, I'm pretty sure "Decrease" is not capitalized in YGO (unless it's at the beginning of a sentence).

 

The effect is original (to me at least) and quite balanced. It reminds me of Thousand Eyes Restrict's effect, but nowhere near as broken.

 

The image is a beginning to feel a little stale, given I've seen it 3 times in the past week. (But I'm not weighing that into the rating -- it feels pointless to do so.)

 

 

Stylish Rank: SShowtime! 9.5/10

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The phase your opponents does not need to have an apostrophe at all. I think decrease doesn't need to be capatalised but yeah you could be right on that.

 

Well with the image I did post this about 5 days ago so if you saw the card then it may not have been stale.

 

So thanks for the Stylish Rank thats original I like it hope you rate my cards more often ^_^

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IT shouldn't be a Dark Tuner unless it's for a Dark Synchro Summon. And with Dark Tuner's, it's - not +. Some parts don't make sense too.

 

FIX and improvisation:

 

1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Spellcaster monsters.

While this card is on the field, neither player change their monsters Battle Position or Tribute Summon. Each time your opponent Summons a monster, you can decrease this cards ATK by 500 to destroy the Summoned Monster. If your opponents Monster Card Zone is full, destroy this card.

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Not necessarily before they were remade into Synchros there was a card that had LIGHT Tuner monster + 1 non-tuner monster as its requirements so I don't see why the requirements need to change.

 

The monster I am talking about is Ancient Sacred Whyvern I just changed the Attribute to DARK monster on this one.

 

And even these remakes have the same generics as Synchro monsters they have a + instead of a -.

 

And that kills the idea I had for this card I wanted the opponent to gain control of the card so it "Freezes" the field thus fitting its name.

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"Each time your opponent Summons a monster, Decrease this cards ATK by 500 to switch the Summoned monster to Defence Position."

 

If it's on your opponent side of the field, the opponent would have control over the card, hence you not being able to decrease the DEF.

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The phase your opponents does not need to have an apostrophe at all. I think decrease doesn't need to be capatalised but yeah you could be right on that.

 

Well with the image I did post this about 5 days ago so if you saw the card then it may not have been stale.

 

So thanks for the Stylish Rank thats original I like it hope you rate my cards more often ^_^

 

Ah' date=' didn't know that. Haha, I'm pretty out of touch with YGO (or any TCG's for that matter) since I quit playing years ago.

 

I'm glad you like the Stylish Rank. xP

 

Didn't think anyone would even care, but it's my own personal taste to do so, instead of just saying "rating". ([i']*yawn*[/i] boring...)

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Did my brother get in onto my account again?

God he is such a pest. Sorry for the spam earlier. *deleted*

This monster is very useful, and I can see it being used in many different decks. Especially in stall decks. It's pretty much Grinder/Lava Golem with an annoying effect.

Can't see any flaws to this card!

9.7/10 Nicely done!

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"Each time your opponent Summons a monster' date=' Decrease this cards ATK by 500 to switch the Summoned monster to Defence Position."

 

If it's on your opponent side of the field, the opponent would have control over the card, hence you not being able to decrease the DEF.

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It says in its effect that it cannot change its battle position, attack or be Tributed so your opponent is stuck with it until its blown up by itself.

 

And its effect says decrease its ATK not its DEF. And it stays in attack position the whole time so theres no reason for it to have its DEF changed.

 

Its a permenant effect that switches the monster to Defence Position thus making them not be able to attack until Magesta is off the field. But by the time this happens any good duelist would have thought of a strategy to prepare a counter attack.

 

But that depends on what cards the opponent Summons.

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