Lizards with guns, what more do you need?

[Dandelo]

 

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 Dragon-Type monster and Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to change the battle positions of all monsters your opponent controls to face-up Defense Position (Flip Effects are negated). If this effect is activated, this card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. If this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. Switch this card to Defense Position at the End Phase of the turn in which this effect was activated.

[Mehmani]

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 Dragon-Type monster and 1 Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn' date=' you can discard 1 card from your hand to [b']change the battle positions of[/b] all monsters your opponent controls to face-up Defense Position (Flip Effects are not activated). If this effect is activated, this card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. If this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

OCG Fix above ^^.

 

Overall, it a decent enough card, albeit slightly overpowered as it guarantees you several attacks that will ALL deal Battle Damage (unless one of your opponent's monsters has a DEF higher than 2500). The effect doesn't fit in with today's current Meta and it seems quite clunky (as in the lines don't really 'flow' between each other). It's a good attempt and OCG errors are only noticeable to a trained eye.

 

Despite my criticism being entirely negative, it think it merits a high score.

 

7.8/10. Keep it up.

[Havok_SCO]

I do like it, it would play well with a cyberdark deck but I think that its overpowered giving you so many atks with piercing damage. Give it some sort of draw back and I think its awesome.

[Dandelo]

Updated: Fixed OCG, added a few drawbacks (1000 Life Points cost, switched to Defense Position) and decreased DEF.

[Havok_SCO]

Thats much better. Though some people might still be a lil upset with it saying its op'd just cause you can combo it with something like limiter removal and some sort of token thing for a really quick 0TK. But who cares.

 

8/10