Guardian Angels

[Knightoth]

New Card Soon, Name Released

[spoiler=Heaven Seer]

Description: "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner LIGHT monsters" Once per turn you can look up to 5 cards from the top of your Deck, Arrange them in any order and place then on the top of your Deck OR you may add 1 card from your hand to your Deck shuffle and draw 1 card

 

[spoiler=Heaven's Gate]

 

[spoiler=Heavens Guardian]Description: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card"Heaven's Gate". This Cards ATK and DEF are equal to the original ATK and DEF of the monsters used as a tribute to Ritual Summon this Card, at the End Phase of your turn reduce the ATK and DEF of this card by half.

 

[spoiler=Angel Soilder]

 

[spoiler=Angel's Feather]

 

[spoiler=Fallen Guardian]

 

[spoiler=Change Of Mined]Coming Soon

 

[Knightoth]

there seems to be a problem with the server and I cant get the pictures of Angel Soilder, Angel's Feather and Fallen Guardian up

They are done but I cant get them SOORRYY

[Knightoth]

ok so there still seems to be a problem with something and I cant get the pictures up

[officedemon]

first thing i see is that heavens guardian needs to be a "fariry/ritual/effect" monster? is it not an effect cus of the ritual? i'm confused.

[Knightoth]

O nono k so the atk and def thing is so u can tell what the atk and def is if the atk and def are ? you have to include this

 

check other ones check relinquished and a thousand eye

[Knightoth]

before i do anything else can you change the attrabute of a monster

[Ichitaru]

nice pics ^^

[Knightoth]

As I sayed before i need help is there any card that can change attrabute

[Emerald Fan]

As I sayed before i need help is there any card that can change attrabute

There are a couple, the main ones that come to mind are DNA Transplant and Scroll of Bewitchment.

Now that that's done, your cards need work. Mainly in the usage of OCG, but I'm here to help. Let's go with the first:

 

Heaven Seer: This first part is close but it should read like this, "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner LIGHT monsters". Then we get into the effect, which should go as such: "Once per turn you can pick up 5 cards from the top of the Deck, arrange them in any order and replace them on top of the Deck OR you can add 1 card from your hand to the Deck, Shuffle and draw 1 card." Just needs a little OCG fix. Moving on.

 

Heaven's Gate: This first part is about right, except for the fact that Ritual Summon should be capitalized, as is the case with all forms of Summoning. And it needs a period at the end of the sentence. The second part is a bit more tricky. The level of your Ritual Monster is 10, so using 2 level 3 monsters is not going to work. It might go something like this: "You must also offer Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 10 or more." That would look much nicer.

 

Heaven's Guardian: The first part is good, except again that you have a capitalization error, this time with Ritual Spell Card. And again with the missed period. It needs the sequence "Fairy/Ritual/Effect" since the part explaining its ATK and DEF is an effect. It should go like this: "The ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the combined original ATK and DEF of the monsters used as a tribute to Ritual Summon this card." However, you might want to dial the amount back or give it some kind of drawback, like "Destroy this card during the End Phase of the turn it was Summoned." or something. Your call.

 

Angel Soldier: Again with the missing punctuation? Might want to give it a bit more flavor text so that it doesn't seem too dull. Other than that, it's fine.

 

Angel's Feather: Punctuation! OCG should go: "Until the End Phase of this turn, when a monster you control is attacked increase the ATK and DEF of the monster by 1000 before Damage Calculation."

 

Fallen Guardian: First part should go as such: " "Angel Soldier" + 1 DARK monster". As to the effect, Fusion Monsters can't go to the hand. They can go to the Extra Deck. Other than that, it should be like this: "When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can draw 1 card then return this card to the Extra Deck. If the card drawn by this effect is a DARK monster, send it to the Graveyard."

 

Overall, these cards have potential, they just need to have the errors fixed. I'll give it a 7/10

[Knightoth]

Thanks emerald fan I will fix these but with Fallen guardian i will fix the effect but i think it should be that if a dark is drawn the monster goes to the extra deck not if the dark is drawn it goes to the graveyard and i always have punncuation problems then cause i never see them on the card. anyway i will fix them and thanks to the comment of them having potential, thanks

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[cruelnoob200]

need help? look at this thread...

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-167644.html

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[cardmaker150]

Nice effects, some grammar problems, but everything looks good 8/10

[Knightoth]

guys I know I haven't been on in quite a while and haven't posted any new threads, but I will be making a new thread soon about... you'll know then