Altaïr Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 [spoiler=Card] [spoiler=Lore]Remove from play 6 Dragon-Type monsters from your hand,Field or Graveyard to Fusion Summon this card.Once per turn, you can discard 1 Level 5 or lower Dragon-Type monster to the Graveyard to increase this card's ATK by 500. During the End Phase that you activated this cards effect this card's original ATK increases by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 Its incredibly hard to summon, maybe put that you can fusion summon it by removing those cards from the graveyard as well as the field and hand, but then again a siumple future fusion would make a quick summon...the pic is infernal dragon, try to find a new one=) a few OCG errors to, try to reword the effect to this maybe? "Once per turn you may discard from your Hand to the Graveyard 1 Level 5 or lower Dragon-Type monster to have this card gain 500 ATK until the End Phase of your turn." way to UP for a level 11, i think after editing itll have potential for a easy 9/10 but at this point 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 i think its hard to summon because you could use other cards to make it like super strong! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fto2201 Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 a few OCG errors + hard to summon + A simple name..but nice pic ^^ 6.6/10 =)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathghost101 Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 I must agree with Maad1.The card is to hard to summon......I see what your trying to do with the last effect....."At the End Phase this monster's ATK is the original ATK." If you reword that a bit, it can work.I give you a 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 what are the OCG errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 OCG fix for effect or i think it is correct or most of it that is Once per turn, you can discard 1 Level 5 or lower Dragon-Type monster to the Graveyard to increase this card's ATK by 500. During the End Phase that you activated this cards effect this card's original ATK increases by 500. image is decent but not the bestSummoning Conditions can be pain but easy if you use future fusion and Dragon's Mirror(simialr to F.G.D)effect is ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fto2201 Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 i think its hard to summon because you could use other cards to make it like super strong!Next..card... nice picture....better ^^ 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 lore:1 LIGHT Dragon-Type+1 DARK Dragon-Type+1 FIRE Dragon-Type+1 WATER Dragon-Type+1 WIND Dragon-Type+1 EARTH Dragon-TypeOnce per turn, you can discard 1 Level 5 or lower Dragon-Type monster to the Graveyard to increase this card's ATK by 500. During the End Phase that you activated this cards effect this card's original ATK increases by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 a big improvment atm 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fto2201 Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 I think you make it a Monster Cardtry again and again can be a good card ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathghost101 Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 I will give the improved card an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRaptor10 Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 I think the name would sound better as Elemental Dragon since it involves 5 elements but its your choice. It's hard to summon. Maybe you should add in the effect "This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play blhablhablah in your Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".)"^^That way, you would just need to have the 5 dragons in your graveyard to summon it. You should also change the effect because just ATK boost makes it underpowered/non-original (not that it's a bad thing). 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 it has 6 fusion and that much ATK-3400 DEF-3000 so its not underpowered so i think its fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy God Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 Alot has been fixed exept:"LIGHT Dragon-Type+1 DARK Dragon-Type+1 FIRE Dragon-Type+1 WATER Dragon-Type+1 WIND Dragon-Type+1 EARTH Dragon-Type" should be.... "1 LIGHT Dragon-Type + 1 DARK Dragon-Type + 1 FIRE Dragon-Type + 1 WATER Dragon-Type + 1 WIND Dragon-Type + 1 EARTH Dragon-Type" (There are spaces before and after the pluses.) Very hard to summon even without a Poly and really not worth the trouble, I also like AresWarrior idea of removing from play those monsters to Special Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 i still think its fine since i could smmon it with dragons mirror or polmerization.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy God Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 i still think its fine since i could smmon it with dragons mirror or polmerization.... But do you seriously know the chances of that happening? 1. Dragons Mirror doesn't work like that. Your asking for 6 Attributes but there's only 5 Monster Card Zones. Unless you use the Graveyard part of the Effect. But how many peoples Decks have 6 Attributes anyway? e.e Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 the graveyard...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 Alot has been fixed exept:"LIGHT Dragon-Type+1 DARK Dragon-Type+1 FIRE Dragon-Type+1 WATER Dragon-Type+1 WIND Dragon-Type+1 EARTH Dragon-Type" should be.... "1 LIGHT Dragon-Type + 1 DARK Dragon-Type + 1 FIRE Dragon-Type + 1 WATER Dragon-Type + 1 WIND Dragon-Type + 1 EARTH Dragon-Type" (There are spaces before and after the pluses.) Very hard to summon even without a Poly and really not worth the trouble' date=' I also like AresWarrior idea of removing from play those monsters to Special Summon.[/color'] lol that was my idea to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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