Marauder X-

[NeXodus]

 

Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. It can only be Special Summoned if you discard 2 random cards from your hand. When this card is sucessfully summoned, flip a coin:

Heads: Draw 1 card

Tails: Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster from your deck in face-up defense position. This card cannot attack the same turn the effect is used. This card is not affected by trap cards.

[Ghoulish]

Great pic and fair original but Opd heaps with the tails result, just maybe put a limit as to how strong the special summoned monster will be also u may need to re word the first line, did u mean to write "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can be Special Summoned by discarding 2 cards from your Hand to the Graveyard?" also u may want to say that u meant to put a fake type so people know 8.3/10 =)

[MibeR]

lots of ocg errors..

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 random cards from your hand. When this card is sucessfully Summoned, toos a coin:

Heads: Draw 1 card

Tails: Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster from your deck in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attacks in the turn this effect is activated. This card is not affected by Trap Cards.

[cruelnoob200]

the tails effect is OP'ed -- it should have a disadvantage like the "Arcana force" sets.

Also, there is a problem with summoning it. if you discard the Maurader x-1 then you cannot summon it... also there should be a condition if you have less than 2 cards in your hand to summon it...

overall 6/10