PenguinZ Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 5 Fiend-Type monsters from your side of the field from play. Once per turn, you can place 1 DARK monster from your deck to the Spell & Trap card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card with the following effect ● Once per turn, you can select and destroy 1 LIGHT Monster on you opponent's side of the field with equal or less DEF than "Yoto-Maron". This card gains 500 ATK for each DARK Monster on your side of the field. The controller of this card can and must attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each with this card if possible, if you cannot do this destroy this card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, destroy all face-up LIGHT monsters. When an Equip Card is equipped to this card, destroy the Equip Card. rate it hate it ect.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomfunfun0530 Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 im know for my suckish cards and overpowering cards but i think this is a good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 ok, bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 hmm has enough drawbacks and works for an anti-light deck, not great but not terrible I don't think it needs to be that high leveled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 It's high leveled because its sorta op'ed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 If you play a card that stops it from attacking then its destroyed, and you need at least 4 monsters on the field in order to summon it so I wouldn't say its OPed at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 if that's what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Why are the effects so big?I can't even READ it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 There's a click-to-view option that says "lore" under the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSStylin' Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Why are the effects so big?I can't even READ it!!! To keep the card balanced? and also because YCM likes to make the text shrinkage cut-off at the 1 or 2 lines before the underscore separating ATK/DEF after the first two text shrinkages. It would be nice if the Card Maker let the text use the full space of the text box before shrinking each time (like with actual cards). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magicjohnson23 Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 perhaps you should've changed the effect to 4 dark type fiend monsters... but it's a good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSStylin' Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 what? Sorry about the previous comment only answering "war chess". What I was saying was that the card maker shrinks the text before the current text size it is using has filled up all the visible space in the text box. In any case' date=' since I'm here already, I may as well evaluate your card: The image is nice, appropriate of your title's thread (and I'm assuming also the name of your monster). From a stand-alone perspective (given that I haven't played the TCG in years and don't know much about the new & fancy cards), your card seems balanced overall. OCG is done quite well, only a few capitalizations here and there that don't belong.("field" and "face-up", in case you're wondering.) Stylish Rank: [i']Awesome![/i] 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 what? Sorry about the previous comment only answering "war chess". What I was saying was that the card maker shrinks the text before the current text size it is using has filled up all the visible space in the text box. In any case' date=' since I'm here already, I may as well evaluate your card: The image is nice, appropriate of your title's thread (and I'm assuming also the name of your monster). From a stand-alone perspective (given that I haven't played the TCG in years and don't know much about the new & fancy cards), your card seems balanced overall. OCG is done quite well, only a few capitalizations here and there that don't belong.("field" and "face-up", in case you're wondering.) Stylish Rank: [i']Awesome![/i] 8.7/10 Face-Up is supposed to be capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSStylin' Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Face-Up is supposed to be capitalized. Actually' date=' it isn't (unless they changed it last night). You can check the actual cards. Here are a few examples:[img']http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20090201234342/yugioh/images/4/4a/TsukuyomiSD6-EN-C-1E.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Ok, thanks for the rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenbjr8 Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Cool card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 thanks, will you rate it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 OCG Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 4 Fiend-Type monsters "from Where?" from play. Once per turn, you can place 1 DARK monster from your deck to the Spell & Trap card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card with the following effect ● Once per turn, you can select and destroy 1 LIGHT Monster on you opponent's side of the field with equal or less DEF than "this card I'm confused the Spell monster or this monster?". This card gains 500 ATK for each DARK Monster on your side of the field. The controller of this card can and must attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each with this card if possible, if you cannot do this destroy this card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, destroy all face-up LIGHT monsters. When an Equip Card is equipped to this card, destroy the Equip Card. I made some questions in the correction so plz answer them before fixing.Really Powerfull, and easy to Summon making it OP. Nobody really uses Equips anymore, but the attack restriction does give hope.Pic is Evil, but just seems unfitting.A 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 "from Where?"the field. I'm confused the Spell monster or this monster?" monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 OCG Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 4 Fiend-Type monsters from your side of the field from play. Once per turn, you can place 1 DARK monster from your deck to the Spell & Trap card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card with the following effect ● Once per turn, you can select and destroy 1 LIGHT Monster on you opponent's side of the field with equal or less DEF than "Yoto-Maron". This card gains 500 ATK for each DARK Monster on your side of the field. The controller of this card can and must attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each with this card if possible, if you cannot do this destroy this card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, destroy all face-up LIGHT monsters. When an Equip Card is equipped to this card, destroy the Equip Card. Now it's fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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