Jace Beleren Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 [/center]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/2987/191438f.jpg' alt='191438f.jpg'> If you control 2 or more "Angelia" monsters on the field, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card destroys a DARK monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Angelia" monster from your Hand or Deck.[/align] [align=center] When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 level 3 or lower "Angelia" monster from your Deck in face-up defense position.[/align] [align=center] When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Angelia" monster from your Hand or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for a Synchro Summon, add 1 "Angelia" monster from your Graveyard except "Angelia Angu" to your Hand. If a Fairy-Type monster you control would be destroyed, you can send this card to the Graveyard instead.[/align] [align=center] This card is uneffected by the effects of a DARK monsters. While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent can only activate 1 Spell or Trap Card per turn. If you control a face-up "The Angelia Archre" on the field, you can Special Summon this card from your Hand. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If you control 1 face-up "Angelia" Monster on the field, you can Special Summon this card from your Hand. Once per turn during your Main Phase, Downgrade all "Angelia" Monster Cards in your hand by 2 Levels until the End Phase. If you activate this effect, you cannot enter the Battle Phase this turn. 1 "Angelia Angu"+ 1 or more non Tuner "Angelia monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy 1 face-up "Angelia" monster you control. This card gains ATK equals to the destroyed monster until the End Phase. Once per turn, you can send 1 "Angelia" monster from your hand to the Graveyard to select and destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. You can remove from play 1 "Angelia" monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card battles a DARK monster, destroy that monster without applying damage calculation. During your End Phase, send 1 Spell card from your hand to the Graveyard. If you cannot, destroy this card. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned Except by sending 1 face-up "The Angelia Archre", "The Angelia Dominia" you control to the Graveyard. When this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy the face-down monster with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or damage calculation. If the destroyed monster was a DARK Monster card, discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand. Select 2 "Angelia" monsters in your Graveyard and add them to your hand. If you activate this effect you cannot Normal Summon or Set monsters this turn. If this card is discarded from your hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, you can return it to the bottom of your Deck. Destroy 1 face-up "Angelia" Monster you control. Negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card, or the Normal or Special Summon of a monster, and destroy that card. When "Angelia" monsters you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 "Angelia" monster with the same Level as the destroyed monster from your Deck to your hand. When an "Angelia" monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, discard one Spell Card from your hand and Special Summon the destroyed monster and increase your Life Points equal to the DEF of that monster. This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:● Once per turn, you can discard one Spell Card from your hand to return 1 card on the field to its owners hand. If you control 1 face-up "The Angelia Archre" on the field, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Each time you discard a Spell Card from your hand by a card effect, select 1 face-up card on the field and destroy it. When "Angelia" monsters you control is selected as attack target, you can discard 1 Spell Card from your hand to negate the attack. Equip only to level 4 or lower "Angelia" monster you control. Once per turn, if the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, add 1 level 4 or lower "Angelia" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. Activate only during your opponent's Battle Phase and when you control no monsters on the field. Special Summon 1 level 3 or lower "Angelia" Monster from your Deck in face-up attack position. Discard 1 Spell Card from your hand and select 1 face-up "Angelia" Tuner Monster you control, the selected monster is treated as being as any level of your choice until the End Phase.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 bumpi want commets guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yigha Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 "Draw cards from the top of your Deck" : you always daw cards from the top of your deck."Then return the rest to the bottom" : of your deck, graveyard, removed from play, ... ? rest is fine 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSStylin' Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 "Then return the rest to the bottom" : of your deck' date=' graveyard, removed from play, ... ?[/quote'] Pretty sure it's referring to the bottom of the Deck, since neither "Graveyard" or "remove(d) from play" are mentioned in-between "Draw cards from the top of your Deck..." and "Then return the rest to the bottom". Though, I must agree with your observations, yigha. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Concerning the card itself, I'm a bit unsure about how balanced it is after reading comments concerning "card advantage" and "how important it is to winning". I can see a few people who would say its effect is OP simply because it allows you to draw up to 5 cards (assuming you have 5 "Angelia" monsters on the field). Judging solely from my own perspective, I think your card is pretty balanced. I see nothing about it that would make it underpowered. OCG Corrections (in bold red):This Card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Summoned by Sending 2 Face-up "Angelia" monsters you control to the Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, draw cards from your Deck equal to the number of face-up "Angelia" monsters you control. If there are 1 or more Spell cards among them, add them to your hand. Then return the rest to the bottom of your Deck. Original Text for Comparison (altered & omitted text in bold):This Card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Summoned by Sending 2 Face-up "Angelia" monsters you control to the Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, Draw cards from the top of your Deck equal to the number of face-up "Angelia" monsters you control, If there are 1 or more spell cards among them, add those Spell cards to your hand. Then return the rest to the bottom. Oh, and I like the image. A little 'modern' for an angel, but nonetheless appropriate. Stylish Rank: Blast! 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 thanx for the OCG fix Stylin*going to fix the OCG right Now* i'll add another angelia monsters later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 hand=HandFace-up=face-upSpell cards=Spell Cards7.5/10 so far....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 ok guys1 new card has been added rate and comment plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 agian hand=Handother than that its ok i say 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 bumpnew cards has been added plz rate and comment and OCG fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 These cards are good. I like em. on the first card though shouldn't it be This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned. All the rest look great. 9/10 =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 thanx for your comments kittyi am glad that u liked them any other comments guys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Should be hand not capitalized for the record and other OCG errors have been pointed out. The cards are nice and you should keep going^.^ I'll Rate - 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Should be hand not capitalized for the record and other OCG errors have been pointed out. The cards are nice and you should keep going^.^ I'll Rate - 8/10 ok thanx for your comments 2 new cards has been added plz rate and comment Now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 bumpi need comments here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSStylin' Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Just a warning, but this a very long post.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The GreatAngelia Exsia Is "GreatAngelia" supposed to be one name/word? or is it supposed to be "Great Angelia"? I love the name and the image, although the picture is somewhat blurry. ATK/DEF are balanced. Both its effects are reasonable and useful. Perfect OCG. Stylish Rank: A 8.5/10-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Angelia Angu I'm not too keen on the name (but that's not going to be counted into the rating). Cute image, but again a tad blurry. I like the summon-engine effects it has; versatile and useful. Practically perfect OCG, except for "Hand", which isn't capitalized. (I know another poster said earlier it was capitalized, but it's not.) Stylish Rank: A 8.5/10-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Angelia Virchu Diggin' the purposely misspelled "Virchu" name. Great image, but a bit blurry. Same thing with "Hand" = "hand". I don't think "Monster" is capitalized either (the one in the first line). I'm not sure if "Downgrade" is capitalized when it isn't at the beginning of a line, despite being a keyword. Other than that, OCG is flawless. The effect is useful and well-balanced. Stylish Rank: A 8.5/10-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Angelia Throne Lovin' the reference to hierarchy of angels thus far. Nice image, but kinda blurry. "Treated" is not capitalized, despite being a keyword. Again, "Hand" = "hand". Otherwise, perfect OCG. Nicely balanced ATK/DEF, especially given it's namesake as a "Throne". Stylish Rank: A 8.5/10-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Angelia Archre The name isn't particularly striking, but again, it's not going to be counted into the rating (b/c it's pointless in this case, imo). "uneffected" is "unaffected", based on normal grammar and OCG. Otherwise, flawless OCG. Stats are pretty nice for a LV4 monster. The 2nd effect is simple & useful, but kind of OP. Perhaps limit it to only during your turn? Stylish Rank: B 8/10-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Angelia Dominia Great name and befitting image (tho a little blurry). In the first line, you don't need to say "on the field" since you already stated "If you control a face-up". "During battle" would be OCG-worded as "During the Battle Phase". You could also abbreviate the entire 2nd effect by saying "During the Battle Phase, this card inflicts Piercing Damage". (Reminder: "Hand" = "hand") The OCG isn't bad, just slightly old and elongated. High ATK for a LV4, but still balanced. Stylish Rank: B 8/10-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Angels Voice Grammatical error in title: It should either be "Angel's Voice" or "Angels' Voice", depending on whether you're referring to the term "Angels" in plural or singular. There is also a grammar error and OCG inconsistency in the beginning portion of the effect lore. The grammar error is that you stated "monsters" in plural form, but you followed up with "you control is destroyed"; should be "you control are destroyed". The OCG inconsistency is simply the wording, which would most likely be written as "When/If an "Angelia" monster you control", instead of using the plural form to refer to ""Angelia" monsters". I'm not sure if OCG-wording would say "with the same Level as the destroyed monster". I have this feeling it would be "with a Level equal to the destroyed monster". Just remember my corrections are by no means 100% flawless (as some people like to sternly point out, as if I said I was perfect -- which I'm most certainly not). Image is great and very appropriate, but again, a little blurry. The effect is highly beneficial and well balanced. Stylish Rank: A 8.5/10-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Great Angelia Principearl I'm guessing this card's name is based on the Principality rank of the angel hierarchy. Image, as always, is great, but blurry. OCG errors/inconsistencies are present in the 2nd and 3rd line: 2nd line: Increase this card's ATK by an amount equal to the destroyed monster's ATK until the End Phase. (I'm not sure if that's 100% accurate, but that's my guess. It might also be "Increase this card's ATK by the ATK of the destroyed monster", but again, not entirely sure.) 3rd line: Once per turn (during which Phase? during both you & your opponent's?), you can send 1 "Angelia" monster from your hand to the Graveyard to select and destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Both effects seem balanced to me. Stylish Rank: A 8.5/10-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Angel Imp Cute image, and actually not blurry at all; appropriate too. OCG is flawless. Stats and effect are simple, clear cut, and balanced. Stylish Rank: A 8.5/10-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Angelia Vanille I can't properly rate this card because the image won't fully load, so I can't see the image or ATK/DEF. The only OCG error is a slight inconsistency in the 2nd line: "If this card battles a DARK monster, destroy it/the monster without applying damage calculation." Other than that, OCG looks good. The effect is well balanced - good effect w/ reasonable drawback. (I'm going to laugh if the image is an image of Vanille from FFXIII.) Stylish Rank: ?/10 (at least a 7)-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Merciless Judgment Great image, no blur, but I'm not sure how befitting it is of the title. It's a bit funky for a card titled "Merciless Judgment" in my opinion. Pretty sure "Monster" isn't capitalized in the first line. "that card" would probably be OCG-worded as "the card" or simply "it". OCG is otherwise well done. The effect may be considered by some somewhat OP because it encompasses Spells, Traps, and Normal & Special Summons, but I think it's all right because it doesn't cover Monster Effects, it requires you to destroy 1 face-up "Angelia" monster you control, and it's only a 1-shot deal. Stylish Rank: B 8/10-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Stage Results:A - 8.5A - 8.5A - 8.5A - 8.5B - 8.0B - 8.0A - 8.5A - 8.5A - 8.5B - 8.0 Total Stylish Rank: A-re ya ready?! 8.35/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 thats was sure a long post thanks for your comments and ratings Stylin any other comments guys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 meh -_- i think they are ok. stylin just completly hung me out to dry 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ace3000 Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 i like it but i tink it is a little bit overpoweredapart from that great love the images and the cards singularly are new and inventive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 70% Keep up the good work and have fun. I like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 70% Keep up the good work and have fun. I like them. thanx for your comments 1 new card has been added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSStylin' Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 The Angelia Vanille Picture is quite what I imagined, but nonetheless appropriate. It's probably just me, but something about futuristic mecha angels takes away the sense of them being "angels". Image is also totally clear this time. Now that I can see the ATK/DEF. . . it still looks well balanced since you have to send 1 Spell card from your hand to Graveyard during each of your End Phases to keep it in play. Stylish Rank: A 8.7/10 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Great Angelia Seraphy OCG is flawless except for the capitalization of "Except" in the 2nd line, and the past tense use of "was" in the last line (I'm pretty sure YGO avoids using past tense whenever possible and would have written it as "is" instead of "was"). Image is a tad blurry, the scythe is an interesting and uncommon appearance for an angel that isn't the Angel of Death, but figure itself is befitting. The image cropping was also done well, it fits all the important aspects into the frame, with the scythe crossing diagonally almost in the center. (That's the art history student in me talking btw.) Not really diggin' the cute swing on the name ("Seraphim" becoming "Seraphy"), but that's not going into the rating; just voicing an opinion. Now for the technical part. The summoning conditions make it sound like it should be a Fusion Monster (but to each their own, right?). The effect is powerful, but fair; balanced by the summoning requirements. The follow-up effect is useful and appropriate of the set's theme. Stylish Rank: A 8.7/10 Stage Results:A 8.7/10A 8.7/10Total Stylish Rank: A+omic! 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted April 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 thanx for your comments buddy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Jace Beleren Posted April 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 bumpnew cards has been added note: i will offer 1 rep for any good comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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