OCG help [Pain card]

[Black★Star]

Lore:While "Nagato" is on the field, this cards original ATK changes to 3000. Once per turn roll 1 six-sided. This cards gains an effect equal to the result:

1: This card cannot be destroyed by card effects

2:Once per turn, pay 1000 life points, Special Summon 1 monster from your deck, it is destroyed durring your End Phase

3:Once per turn, negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters and gain Life Points equal to its ATK.

4:Once per turn, Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard

5:Once per turn, destroy 1 card on the field

6:While this card is on the field, your opponent must skip the Battle Phase

Im not sure if i did this right, When it get a effect i still want it to have this effect :"While "Nagato" is on the field, this cards original ATK changes to 3000. Once per turn roll 1 six-sided. This cards gains an effect equal to the result:". Did i make that clear in the lore, and also i want the effect to change it cannot have 2 effects at once, did i also make that clear in the lore ?

[Altaïr]

oh my god thats over powered!

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5.5/10 confusiong to overpowered if you want to make it good make it like 12 for me to have all those effects.....

[Akumakagemaru]

Maybe so, but the base concept is nice. I would recommend changing it to at least an 8 star.

 

also, OCG should be sometihng like this:

 

"While "Nagato" is on the field, this cards original ATK changes to 3000. Once per turn roll 1 six-sided. This cards gains an effect equal to the result until the End Phase of the turn:

1: This card cannot be destroyed by card effects

2:Once per turn, pay 1000 life points, Special Summon 1 monster from your deck, it is destroyed durring your End Phase

3:Once per turn, negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters and gain Life Points equal to its ATK.

4:Once per turn, Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard

5:Once per turn, destroy 1 card on the field

6:While this card is on the field, your opponent must skip the Battle Phase."

 

Don't know for sure, but that looks right to me.

[GraveHorizon]

Suggestion (I know its been done, but whatever):

"While "Nagato" is on the field, this card's original ATK is 3000. Once per turn, roll a six-sided die and apply the following effect:

1: This card cannot be destroyed by card effects.

2: Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster from your deck. Destroy it during the End Phase.

3: Once per turn, negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters and gain Life Points equal to its ATK.

4: You can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard.

5: Destroy 1 card on the field.

6: Your opponent skips their next Battle Phase."

 

Cool idea. Nice variable effects, but I also suggest giving it a drawback to make it not so OP'd. Maybe say "At the start of your Main Phase, roll a six-sided die" to set the time you have to do it. And I think it's implied that the rolled effect becomes it's only extra effect. The pic is obviously squished, try cropping it to match the proportions of the available card space. Is it part of a set?

 

6.5/10