Un$€ncOrED Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Hey this is my first ever card i made. After looking at my cards and some advice from a friend about ocg i have made this. The atk and def is off Blue eyes but as i progress ill be more original. So please tell me how to improve because if you say "Its sucks" then how will i get better if you be a f@cking retard and say that. lol. Cards Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters you control. Once per turn by removing from play 1 Trap Card on your side of the field you can inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed both players lose 1000 Life Points. <3 EDIT: I read that guys page i have to say Father Wolf made the image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Underpowered. 800 burn for a Trap isn't nearly a good enough effect to warrant a 3-Trib Special; I'd just run Plasma. Or maybe Obelisk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Un$€ncOrED Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 damn, i was guna add a more LP burn but i thought it would be to op'd Ill change. thank you! Oo and idk if you can use Obelisk in a duel can you? Well unless you have the effect version. anyways thanks! <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 This is your first card :O The OCG is perfect Pic is good (Well...I won't really count it since you did not find it.) Well...yes there is alot of counters to this card but really good for a first 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 great idea and new member!9.9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Ok, now it's a little more solid. And since it is a Fire-Type, it's got combo potential in aggro-burn decks. Summon this guy, remove your own Gravity Bind for 1000, attack for 3000? Good stuff. Somehow, though, "Flaming Dark Horse" doesn't quite match the epicness of that pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Un$€ncOrED Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 This is your first card :O The OCG is perfect Pic is good (Well...I won't really count it since you did not find it.) Well...yes there is alot of counters to this card but really good for a first 8.7/10 ya i am a verey lazy person so i went with simply looking on here for an image. Thank you for your comment. And f@ck the counters hahah jk Thanks! <3 great idea and new member!9.9/10! Oo Thanks <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 your doing great on this site.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Un$€ncOrED Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Me..? oo thanks didnt know there was a level of greatness on a site about YGO cards but whatever.....hahah :) <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Not bad, ocg looks great, especially capitalization of the right things. ;D Effect could be more creative, but being your first card it's quite good. ^_^ KIU. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 5 stars! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black★Star Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Very good for a new member 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Un$€ncOrED Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Thanks! I commented on your awsome pics. Your good. But anyways thank you for the nice comments. didnt except them really. Ya ill be creative in the future but for now its kinda of a test card haha ;) But ya catman thanks for the comment! EDIT: This was directed to ~catman. But thx to the others to they mean alot. Thanks! <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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