DeLorean - Time Machine

[Speed_M16]

I like feed back

 

Once per turn roll a six-sided dice and based on your roll you can activate one of these effects.

- Remove from play one monster for the number of turns you rolled.

- Go forward that many turns you rolled. All turn based card effect change based on the roll. Draw one card for every turn.

- Go back that many turns you rolled all monsters, spells, and traps in your hand, graveyard, and field return to the deck in the order they were drawn except this card. this card is then changed to defense position for that many turns you rolled and cannot activate any of it's effects until the end phase of the rolled number.

 

There arn't many dice made cards so I made this card one.

[CardMaker3000]

original, nice effect, awesome film.

 

I don't know exactly if there is any errors on OCG but according to Lore only (the writing is too small) You have some basic Capitalising issues in regular grammar. Some sentences start with lower-case letters. "It's" is It is. And no apostrophes are used in yu-gi-oh, "its" is the correct word for possession. If you understand.

 

9/10

[Inferno I20]

its a pretty good effect

there might be some OCG errors but i cant really tell

some of the effects while original can be confusing or useless

 

one last thing how would each of the effects be activated anyway?

"Once per turn roll a six-sided dice and based on your roll you can activate one of these effects."

 

the effects have nothing to do with what you roll. so if you rolled a 6 all of the effects happen

[Astro Dude]

Awesome. Loved this movie.