Grunt Issun Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Im working on a set of guys called the alpha warriors. there are at least 26 monsters in all. but possibly some fusions. plus support so far i only have 5 so just rate what i have now. beware most of these arnt actually warrior type. all picture credit so far goes to JazinKay my fifth card isnt loading is it?Please correct for me, any wrong OCG or spelling P.S i know some are weird but i was desprate for names Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikatsui Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Too lazy to point out OCG but...graveyard=GraveyardNames aren't too bad, but still needs workIdea seems a little usedBut a solid idea, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Yeah i thought Chiken warrior was a little over the top huh?But if the idea is used alot that means its good doesnt it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 No... just no... Atom warrior does not work. Seriously.. ATOM warrior? Why not Asian Warrior? or Air Warrior? Or Astrophysicist Warrior? . Also, vanillas suck. give them an effect. You have ocg and... english grammar errors.Chiken is Chicken. Chiken is not a word.... And alot of ocg errors Other then that, pretty good. 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Wow you gave me a better rate then ikatsui yet you made my cards sound horrible. Okay one. Vannilas are good. I can change atom warrior to an effect but I cant think of effects for Chicken.two. Atom is cool. its a good picture too. Plus ASIAN WARRIOR!!! WTF?three. Its hard to come up with good names when your thinking of 26 names at a time, and you have MCA's comming up, for those who dont know its a test that all minneesotians have to take until they graduate high school Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSStylin' Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 You might want to capitalize "alpha warriors" in your lore text if they're supposed to be an Archetype. B Bomb Warrior OCG Correction (mostly just a rewording to be consistent with OCG wording):"During the Damage Step of a Battle Phase involving this card, destroy both monsters and reduce Battle Damage to 0." C Chiken Warrior OCG Correction (just regular grammatical & spelling errors):"Probably one of the weirdest Alpha warriors. This chiken is known to have evolved from a sonic chick losing its speed, but gaining power. Its master, a new breed of Harpie Lady, rests on top of it. D Death Warrior OCG Correction:Once per turn during the Battle Phase, you can Tribute 1 monster on your field to decrease the ATK of an attacking monster by equal to the ATK of the Tributed Monster. You cannot Tribute a monster with ATK greater than the attacking monster. The cards aren't particularly inspiring (especially the names), and it's probably too early to give a rating/grade/etc. since there are still many cards to be made in the set. The current cards in the set are relatively balanced for the most part; that much I can say for certain. (Maybe a little underwhelming in some aspects compared to today's "good" cards.) Though, since you requested to be rated based on what you have currently. . . Stylish Rank: Keep at it! 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Alphabet monsters? ...You.... XDMeh, I'd like to see vanilla support, so I'll wait until later to rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Wow you gave me a better rate then ikatsui yet you made my cards sound horrible. Okay one. Vannilas are good. I can change atom warrior to an effect but I cant think of effects for Chicken.two. Atom is cool. its a good picture too. Plus ASIAN WARRIOR!!! WTF?three. Its hard to come up with good names when your thinking of 26 names at a time' date=' and you have MCA's comming up, for those who dont know its a test that all minneesotians have to take until they graduate high school[/quote'] I tend to keep my rates above 7 and lower then 10. Makes me seem like a reasonable rater and shows that nothing is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 oh...well thats weird. what about those new god cards that suck horribly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adogadog8 Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Ok cool concept but in your earlier post u said vanilas, their vanillas, u need to work on ur actual grammar. Also, vanillas have no power whatsoever, there is no one in the world who could win a duel solely with vanillas, i would suggest making these cards work a little better with each other.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Marluxia~ Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 7/10.......enough said........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rapahael Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Vanillas aren't bad like everyone says. They are, in my opinion, a fundamental part of YGO. You just need to support them well, or they might be a bit useless. Like everyone above said, you have some errors, like Chiken = Chicken. Chiken is not a word. Althought I like the pics, the second one is a bit blurry. I like the last card most, it's the best for me. The second one might be useful sometimes, I guess. In general, your cards are not bad at all. Just work on the names, you could have made a lot better. 7/1O. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Anyone who says vannilas are bad and i should make my cards work better together I HAVE 4 CARDS IN A SET OF MORE THEN 26, THEY ARNT GOING TO BE PERFECT TOGETHER WITH ONLY 4! sorry but i had alot of anger...im cool now. Alot of my spells and traps will need multiple of these And its not an archtype becuase all my cards will target a specific one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Anyone who says vannilas are bad and i should make my cards work better together I HAVE 4 CARDS IN A SET OF MORE THEN 26' date=' THEY ARNT GOING TO BE PERFECT TOGETHER WITH ONLY 4! sorry but i had alot of anger...im cool now. Alot of my spells and traps will need multiple of these And its not an archtype becuase all my cards will target a specific one.[/quote'] Egyptian rage =O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 I wish i wasnt so lazy, then i would finish making these lol. but im working on them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSStylin' Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 I wish i wasnt so lazy' date=' then i would finish making these lol. but im working on them[/quote'] No one's rushing you, so no worries. Take your time to make 'em great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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