Samurai Bunny!

[Dwhale]

This is the start to a new set I'm creating with Shinigami_Ichigo. I'm focusing on making card that are very realistic & could be actual Yu-Gi-Oh Cards. Just look at it, I can see people using him, what do you think? :P

 

 

If this card is flipped due to the attack of an opponent's monster, you may discard 1 card from your hand to negate the attack. Once per turn you may flip this monster into face-down Position. As long as this monster is face-up on your side of the field every turn your opponent loses 500 Life Points. Each time this card successfully attacks, increase the ATK of this card by 200 points.

[Bloodrun]

pretty good 9/10 =)

correct me if im wrong, but shouldnt Position be capitalized?

[TAG]

You should use "this monster" instead of "this creature". Also, it should be loses, not looses. Still, really nice card! 9/10

[Dwhale]

pretty good 9/10 =)

correct me if im wrong' date=' but shouldnt Position be capitalized?

[/quote']

 

I think so, my mistake & Thanks. I think this is my best single ever.

[EliminateHRN]

I like it but there are a few mistakes mostly what the others said 9/10

[Yusei Fudou]

Looses = Loses.

Creature = Monster.

 

Overall, good card. 8/10

[Yankee]

well, i got here to late, everbody already said it. 8/10

[Dwhale]

I think that its fixed now.Thanks for the help. Thanks alot!That means alot coming from you guys but.. why not 10/10 could you point out the flaws?

[TAG]

for me, it was just the creature and looses thing. now that that's fixed.........

[arpeejajo]

One thing you missed was the first ATK should be attack. 9/10

[Yaden Yuki]

i think i can't really see any mistakes any more so that means congrats 10/10

[Bloodrun]

pretty good 9/10 =)

correct me if im wrong' date=' but shouldnt Position be capitalized?

[/quote']

 

I think so, my mistake & Thanks. I think this is my best single ever.

 

lol your welcome

 

I think that its fixed now.Thanks for the help. Thanks alot!That means alot coming from you guys but.. why not 10/10 could you point out the flaws?

you know, just because something gets a 10/10, does not mean that it is good, you see..

nah ill save you the lecture :lol: =)

[Dwhale]

It looks awesome except that it looks like a goatish thing more than a bunny rabbit?

 

Truthfully I'm not sure what it is :lol:

Thanks Soul it's great hearing it from you & also did you get the Challenge PM?

 

pretty good 9/10 =)

correct me if im wrong' date=' but shouldnt Position be capitalized?

[/quote']

 

I think so, my mistake & Thanks. I think this is my best single ever.

 

lol your welcome

 

I think that its fixed now.Thanks for the help. Thanks alot!That means alot coming from you guys but.. why not 10/10 could you point out the flaws?

you know' date=' just because something gets a 10/10, does not mean that it is good, you see..

nah ill save you the lecture :lol: =)

[/quote']

 

No, No - I got all the time in the world!

[Draco Straybyrn]

The grammar's good, but OCG needs fixing. 8/10

[Dwhale]

The grammar's good' date=' but OCG needs fixing. 8/10

[/quote']

Grammar & OCG are kinda the same.

[Bloodrun]

It looks awesome except that it looks like a goatish thing more than a bunny rabbit?

 

Truthfully I'm not sure what it is :lol:

Thanks Soul it's great hearing it from you & also did you get the Challenge PM?

 

pretty good 9/10 =)

correct me if im wrong' date=' but shouldnt Position be capitalized?

[/quote']

 

I think so, my mistake & Thanks. I think this is my best single ever.

 

lol your welcome

 

I think that its fixed now.Thanks for the help. Thanks alot!That means alot coming from you guys but.. why not 10/10 could you point out the flaws?

you know' date=' just because something gets a 10/10, does not mean that it is good, you see..

nah ill save you the lecture :lol: =)

[/quote']

 

No, No - I got all the time in the world!

 

ok well dont say i didnt warn you

and for those this next statement could offend i appologize

 

ok just because you receive a 10/10 on your card doesnt mean its good, there are many, and boy i mean many people here, who just open threads go through *zip*

oh awesome! 10/10 with out even looking at the card, except for the picture

 

then are people who open of the thread look at the card, say 10/10 but they themselves dont know anything about grammar, word phrasing, or spelling.

 

then theres these people

ooo i like you 10/10

you know i think you tried decently and the pictures good 10/10

you know, you have talent, you sure do 10/10

 

she what im getting at?

thats it, in a nut shell lol

[Draco Straybyrn]

Grammar =/= OCG

Grammar =Their vs There cs They're

OCG = If this card is flipped due to the attack of an opponent's monster, you may discard 1 card from your hand to negate the attack. Once per turn you may flip this monster into face-down Position. As long as this monster is face-up on your side of the field every turn your opponent loses 500 Life Points. Each time this card successfully attacks, increase the ATK of this card by 200 points. vs When this card is flipped due to an opponent's attack, you may discard 1 card from your hand in order to negate the attack. Once per turn, you may flip this card into face-down Defense Position. While this card remains face-up on your side of the field, decrease their Life Points by 500 points during each of their Standby Phases.

 

>_<

[Dwhale]

It looks awesome except that it looks like a goatish thing more than a bunny rabbit?

 

Truthfully I'm not sure what it is :lol:

Thanks Soul it's great hearing it from you & also did you get the Challenge PM?

 

pretty good 9/10 =)

correct me if im wrong' date=' but shouldnt Position be capitalized?

[/quote']

 

I think so, my mistake & Thanks. I think this is my best single ever.

 

lol your welcome

 

I think that its fixed now.Thanks for the help. Thanks alot!That means alot coming from you guys but.. why not 10/10 could you point out the flaws?

you know' date=' just because something gets a 10/10, does not mean that it is good, you see..

nah ill save you the lecture :lol: =)

[/quote']

 

No, No - I got all the time in the world!

 

ok well dont say i didnt warn you

and for those this next statement could offend i appologize

 

ok just because you receive a 10/10 on your card doesnt mean its good, there are many, and boy i mean many people here, who just open threads go through *zip*

oh awesome! 10/10 with out even looking at the card, except for the picture

 

then are people who open of the thread look at the card, say 10/10 but they themselves dont know anything about grammar, word phrasing, or spelling.

 

then theres these people

ooo i like you 10/10

you know i think you tried decently and the pictures good 10/10

you know, you have talent, you sure do 10/10

 

she what im getting at?

thats it, in a nut shell lol

 

I see what you mean! Yup that happens a lot! So truthfully what rating do you give this card?

[Bloodrun]

Grammar =/= OCG

Grammar =Their vs There cs They're

OCG = If this card is flipped due to the attack of an opponent's monster' date=' you may discard 1 card from your hand to negate the attack. Once per turn you may flip this monster into face-down Position. As long as this monster is face-up on your side of the field every turn your opponent loses 500 Life Points. Each time this card successfully attacks, increase the ATK of this card by 200 points. vs When this card is flipped due to an opponent's attack, you may discard 1 card from your hand in order to negate the attack. Once per turn, you may flip this card into face-down Defense Position. While this card remains face-up on your side of the field, decrease their Life Points by 500 points during each of their Standby Phases.

 

>_<

[/quote']

 

ah ha

this is where u are wrong my friend

you see OCG and Grammar are the same thing

people only use "Grammar" because they themselves do not know what OCG means

and "Official Card Grammar" just means that it is how, and what the card makers use on the cards

so nothing special,

just a different name =/

 

and dereck i give it the same as before

9/10

true it is a single card, but single cards are a lot easier to control in the grammar department, and are alot easier to control in the strength department, very rarley do i give a single a 10/10, the exception to this, is rholowie, if youve seen his cards, you understand why lol

but i also tend rate more harshly one sets, because they are the hardest to really control, yuh know?

[Dwhale]

Grammar =/= OCG

Grammar =Their vs There cs They're

OCG = If this card is flipped due to the attack of an opponent's monster' date=' you may discard 1 card from your hand to negate the attack. Once per turn you may flip this monster into face-down Position. As long as this monster is face-up on your side of the field every turn your opponent loses 500 Life Points. Each time this card successfully attacks, increase the ATK of this card by 200 points. vs When this card is flipped due to an opponent's attack, you may discard 1 card from your hand in order to negate the attack. Once per turn, you may flip this card into face-down Defense Position. While this card remains face-up on your side of the field, decrease their Life Points by 500 points during each of their Standby Phases.

 

>_<

[/quote']

 

ah ha

this is where u are wrong my friend

you see OCG and Grammar are the same thing

people only use "Grammar" because they themselves do not know what OCG means

and "Official Card Grammar" just means that it is how, and what the card makers use on the cards

so nothing special,

just a different name =/

 

and dereck i give it the same as before

9/10

true it is a single card, but single cards are a lot easier to control in the grammar department, and are alot easier to control in the strength department, very rarley do i give a single a 10/10, the exception to this, is rholowie, if youve seen his cards, you understand why lol

but i also tend rate more harshly one sets, because they are the hardest to really control, yuh know?

 

Yup, Thanks 4 The Honesty!

[Bloodrun]

Grammar =/= OCG

Grammar =Their vs There cs They're

OCG = If this card is flipped due to the attack of an opponent's monster' date=' you may discard 1 card from your hand to negate the attack. Once per turn you may flip this monster into face-down Position. As long as this monster is face-up on your side of the field every turn your opponent loses 500 Life Points. Each time this card successfully attacks, increase the ATK of this card by 200 points. vs When this card is flipped due to an opponent's attack, you may discard 1 card from your hand in order to negate the attack. Once per turn, you may flip this card into face-down Defense Position. While this card remains face-up on your side of the field, decrease their Life Points by 500 points during each of their Standby Phases.

 

>_<

[/quote']

 

ah ha

this is where u are wrong my friend

you see OCG and Grammar are the same thing

people only use "Grammar" because they themselves do not know what OCG means

and "Official Card Grammar" just means that it is how, and what the card makers use on the cards

so nothing special,

just a different name =/

 

and dereck i give it the same as before

9/10

true it is a single card, but single cards are a lot easier to control in the grammar department, and are alot easier to control in the strength department, very rarley do i give a single a 10/10, the exception to this, is rholowie, if youve seen his cards, you understand why lol

but i also tend rate more harshly one sets, because they are the hardest to really control, yuh know?

 

Yup, Thanks 4 The Honesty!

 

no rpoblem, anytime you have a problem or a question

or a banana just shoot a pm my way

:lol: dont ask =/

[Draco Straybyrn]

Okay, you don't get it.

 

Grammar is what they teach in school. English class. Capitalization, paragraphs, word choice, sentence fluency, all that and more.

 

OCG is the specific wording on Yugioh cards. I already gave the example.

 

Some cards have problems with one, others with both, and rarely they have none.

 

If you didn't understand that, take English 9 again.

[Bloodrun]

Okay' date=' you don't get it.

 

Grammar is what they teach in school. English class. Capitalization, paragraphs, word choice, sentence fluency, all that and more.

 

OCG is the specific wording on Yugioh cards. I already gave the example.

 

Some cards have problems with one, others with both, and rarely they have none.

 

If you didn't understand that, take English 9 again.

[/quote']

 

dude you just rephrased what i said, in a different format

let me dumb it down

grammar same as ocg

ocg is what we use

grammar is what they use who dont know what ocg is =/

not trying to be mean or anything, but really its nothing that needs to be argued about =/

[Draco Straybyrn]

"grammar same as ocg"

 

NO! NO! NO!

 

There is a big difference! Grammar is in essays and life! OCG is using specific wordings! If grammar was the same as OCG, no one would be able to understand any cards, and each effect would have 100 different wordings! GRAMMAR =/= OCG!

[Dwhale]

"grammar same as ocg"

 

NO! NO! NO!

 

There is a big difference! Grammar is in essays and life! OCG is using specific wordings! If grammar was the same as OCG' date=' no one would be able to understand any cards, and each effect would have 100 different wordings! GRAMMAR =/= OCG!

[/quote']

 

He's got a really good point! I thought they were the same.