Saiba Aisu Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Hello, everyone. So, anyways, I have recently decided to focus on extending my cardmaking work for my current writing project, Days of the Black Apple. In this case, I decided to give you guys a sneak peak at another of the many Japanese-styled cards cards which will be featured in my current writing project, Days of the Black Apple. This card is further support to the Deck which featured Elemental Empress Chiko, Elemental Empress Mizuko, Elemental Empress Enko, Elemental Empress Kuroko, and Elemental Empress Fuuko. As always, your comments and suggestions are appreciated. === Elemental Empress Hikariko - Original Image by Zeiva; Edited by Alcander & Saiba Aisu. Elemental Empress HikarikoLevel 8LightSpellcaster-Type/EffectATK 2400 / DEF 2000You can Special Summon this card from your hand by Tributing 2 LIGHT monsters on either side of the field. Each time a Spell Card is activated, gain 800 Life Points. Once per turn, during either player's turn, when your opponent activates a card effect that would remove a card(s) from the field, you can negate the activation and effect of that 1 card and send it to the Graveyard. This card cannot declare an attack during the turn this effect is activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Well it is a pretty impressive Card but i feel it a little too powerful because: 1-It's a constant Solemn Judgment.2-It's a Spell Card Life Gainer.3-If it's effect is activated During your opponent's turn you can still Attack During your next turn or if that's an error you did not notice then it's okay. And because it's very easy to summon since it can be Normal Summoned as well and a perfect match against Lightsworn and Fairy Decks i have to give it a 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Parion: Yep, I totally agree with you. Looking back, Hikariko is ridiculously powerful. As you said, she's basically a Solemn Judgment, provided you skip your attack per turn. And yeah, she was intended to be able to negate during the opponent's turn and still attack during yours. She's always nightmarishly powerful against Lightsworn, as you mentioned. Thanks for providing such useful and on-target feedback. You'll be happy to know I edited her effect. More comments, please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 oooh shiny!Me like. You did a great job. It fits in with the other empresses perfectly. OCG looks good, and the image is great! 10/10Great Card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted April 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 Thanks, Superjunior! I'm very glad you like the card and how she turned out. I'm pretty fond of this set, and now with Hikariko, the Elemental Empresses are almost complete. Thanks for taking the time to post such a positive comment, and thanks so much for the perfect rating. More comments, please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 Now that the effect it's edited seems good to me (OCG is good as always), this would be a perfect card against D.D. monsters, I love the empresses. :3 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 Well okay thanks for making it balanced but it would be better if you made it 500 Life Point Gain Since if you play against Spellcasters this is still freakishly powerful.Just my advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted May 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 I can't believe I never responded to those comments... I must have been busier than I thought. Alcander: Thanks very much, my friend. I appreciate you taking the time to post such a positive comment on this thread; I know I can always count on you support and suggestions. I'm glad he final Empress is to your liking! Parion: Yep, no problem; in fact, thank you for taking the time to post such a useful piece of constructive criticism. However, I'm going to stay with an 800 Life Point gain in this case, seeing as it's a trait that all of the Elemental Empresses have in common. More comments, please! I may try and get back into the swing of cardmaking with additional support for this archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 I like the card and the effects certainly suit for an empress, i give 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Thanks Scheath, I'm really glad you like the card and find the effect suitable. She works well in conjunction with the other Elemental Empresses, so I'm pretty happy with how she turned out, as well. More comments, please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 hmm..I thought i'd see flawless OCG...am i dumb or is it really "tributing" - i thought it should be "Tributing"..weird mistake for a 5 Star - Dude+ im not sure about the "a card(s) [...] " part Pic: to much Anime/Manga Style...not so YGO-Card-style 1.5/2Originality: Gain Life for a Light monster = not original..2nd part of the effect...Good! 2,5/3Balance: well..i guess not attacking for that "not remove card [...]" effect is a good drawback 2.75/3OCG: 1.75/2 8,5/10 + 0,5 Style-Bonus9/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 It's not just you, it's a chronic mistake of mine; I always forget to capitalize the first letter of "tributing". The rest of the card grammar is fine though.. I tend to pride myself on OCG. Also, it would help if you went and did some research before jumping to conclusions on effects, as gaining 800 Life Points per Spell Card is something that all of the Empresses do, regardless of their individual Attribute. Still, somehow I managed to get a good rating so thanks for that! More comments, please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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