Worm Victory Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 When this card is Tribute Summoned by Tributing a "Life" monster you can either Inflict 1500 points of damage to your opponent or increase your Life Points by 1000. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally)When you Summon this card Take 1000 damage. When you draw a "Life" monster during your Draw Phase, gain 500 Life Points and have this card gain 400 ATK until the end of the turn.FLIP: Select 1 card on your opponents side of the field and destroy it and take 700 Damage. If this card is flipped face-up during your opponents turn take an additional 600 points of damage.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can Special Summon this card when you have 4000 or less Life Points. Once per turn, take 1000 points of damage to have this card gain 600 ATK and DEF until the end of the turn.This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned take 2000 damage. When a Spell or Trap card is activated gain 700 Life Points and Inflict 500 damage to your opponent. You can only control 1 "Shaqute - Dark Life Lord".This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. this card cannot be Special Summoned unless you have 1000 or less Life Points. When this card destroys a monster by battle, gain Life Points equal to that monster's original ATK1 Tuner monster + 1 or more Non-Tuner "Life" monstersThis card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. Once per turn, You can select one monster card in either players Graveyard and Special Summon it. Take damage equal to the Summoned monsters ATK and return it to the original Owner's Graveyard at the end of the turn.While this card is Face-up on the field when a "Life" monster's effect activates which includes taking damage, Halve the amount you take. If you control 4 or more "life" monsters you can draw one additional card during your Draw Phase. Plz rate/comments/suggestions. First set im attempting to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 this deck is full of risk,, but its oruginal i think,,keep trying,, clear,, Caps the first words placed after a dot. thats the ocg sugesttion 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 The names and pics don't really make sense. Maybe try "Vitus" instead of "life." 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Cool thanks man, im comming out with spell,trap and many other cards. I'd like it if more people would rate em. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bentleyeugene92 Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Reminds me a lot of Psychic type monsters (the paying life points. except you take the damage as effeect damage) but still pretty cool. Dark Life Lord is a bit Underpowered imo since nobody tributes 2 cards anymore. Special summoning it under certain amounts of lifepoints like the other trump cards would be much nicer or have it negate those spells and traps or something. But it's you're cards its up to you really. I think Life soul should be "When you draw a "Life" monster during your Draw Phase, REVEAL IT TO gain 500 Life Points and have this card gain 400 ATK until the end of the turn." Very tiny mistake and very cool cards 9.5/10 ( because like everything in life there is Always room for improvement) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Thanks, Ill look into fixing them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taekaba123 Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 1st pic way too overused..and these cards is risky...you must have dian keto 4 these Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted April 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 I would be adding more cards but for sum reason they won't upload Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rizikin Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 Dian Keto is pretty fail.Use Poison instead.these cards look great! Just sometimes there are random Capitals in the middle of sentences, but the idea is really cool.like bentleyeugene92 said, no one rly Tributes 2 monsters anymore. So you should make Dark Life Lord Special Summonable like the other Key Cards. :) Rating: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Souji Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 The names and pics don't really make sense. Maybe try "Vitus" instead of "life." 8/10I also think.. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taekaba123 Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 or maybe use the curse thing (spell card) that yusei used with the crystal skull^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted April 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 Well thanks everybody =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted April 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2010 2 More cards have been added...thinking Synchro card is op'ed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officedemon Posted April 24, 2010 Report Share Posted April 24, 2010 if you want the cards to be more realistic take out "what should i put here>?" with LIMITED EDITION its a bit odd to see it... :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card_Critic24 Posted April 24, 2010 Report Share Posted April 24, 2010 Hmmm.... I guess i could say... 8/10 good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CARLCGL Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 mmmm i guess the berseker should say: pay 1000 life points to have this card gain 600 ATK" or maybe " Once per turn increase this card's ATK and DEF by 600 until the End Phase and take 1000 life points some effects could be more stronger oh and the second pic is hyper-mega overused Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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