Saku Posted December 27, 2007 Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 My newest Set Archer's of Legend revolves around the new monsters "Lady Archers" and their unique abilities which allows you to discard them from the deck, hand, field tribute, or even RFG them in your grave. ^Basicly the "Grandmaster of the Six Samurai" but Lady Archer-Style!^I know its art doesnt match with the rest of them But i couldn't help it^The "Cannon Soldier" of the Group^"Great Shogun Shien" well at least she similar to him, just different Last Effects.^I Love this pic!All Credit for this Pic goes to YankeeFan007 for finding me this pic!^Again Credit to YankeeFan007 for this Pic!Technicly the Only reason i named her violet instead of something else is because of her art.If you have seen Zatch Bell you'll know "Lady Violet." and if you have seen the Japanese version you'll know her as Big Boing (Get where im going with this?) I Hope their Art's Match.Im Trying to keep them as close as Possible after My Last Set's art didnt go together very well.So tell me if you dont think they match.Well as they say in Denmark (i think) "farvel" (which is Danish for Bye) P.S:THey're names are based off the Danish and Japanese Language which is why they're names will seem wierd (props to any danish and Japanese people here) P.S.S:REMEMBER PEOPLE Always point out my Problems.I Dont care if this is the worst card you have ever seen im begging you please Point out my errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 27, 2007 Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 Some Grammer errors, OCG errors, the picture for card 2 looks squished and some spelling errors. Not bad tho... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 Ok thank you.But please next Time Point out the Problems (even though i see where you get the Squished part) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 I think the pics are fine.Lady Archer - Vand - Graveyard, attack your opponents Life Points directly.Lady Archer - Jord - until has only 1 'l'.Lady Archer - Oplyse - change each to every. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 They're pretty good, Saku. I like em! (Lady, eh?) The grammar mistakes have already been pointed out, so yeah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Thank you cyber (yes "Lady".It has a nice ring to it.Sorry if it seems i am stealing your idea. :oops:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 No, it's totally ok. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Very Nicely Done! My Favorite Is Youji! Not Extremely Clever Effects But, Good! 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Thank you!Also Whats not so clever about the effects?Im Just wonderin because these effects are just comin off the top of my head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chargerfan Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 10/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 WOOT WOOT!! Sweet. Finally some great reviews! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 I love the pics man, congrats. Some probs to me, but srtill, great. 9/10MAKE MORE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Trust me dude, they're be ALOT more where these came from (finally!A Set that i havent set a Specific Limit for) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 hmmopponent's needs the ' before sand Cards after Trap Spell and or Monster, needs to be capitalized.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Ok Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 The pictures could be better and there are some grammar errors. But its not bad at all. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Ok...thank you *Saku Points to the Giant Sign he posted on the card saying "POINT THEM OUT!"* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Pretty good job, some of the pics are fantastic, others no so great...a few mistakes such as:For Yousei, the effect should be: Once per turn, you can remove 1 monster in your Graveyard with "Lady Archer" in its card name from play to destroy 1 card on the field. "This card can destroy one card" makes no sense. ^^ Don't capitalize "Destroy" in Rusuban's effect, and don't capitalize "opponent's" in Archers' Assault. Good job, Saku! 9/10. I loathe Chisai.... :[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Chisai - Why!Its not my favorite (mine is a tie between Vand and Takame ^^) but i like it! Yousei - I Kept it like that to make its effect optional.You Can remove a LA in your graveyard (making a card that requires RFG'd LA) . Then if you want to you can destroy a monster on the field (good for killing of useless monsters you control or getting through something tough!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Good cards AGAIN. lol 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 xD Thanks again for the pics Yankee (mind me if you dont want to be called this.Im too lazy to write out actually names so i shorten everyone's names.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 ^_^ I get called yankee all the time, I find it cool, i'm just known as "Yankee" ^_^If you ever want pics again, just ask ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 Thanks! Also i found out how to get great pics (apparently for the pics imlooking for Photobucket is the best place i've seen O_O [normally i use Deviantart] ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 Yeah...photobucket is great...Deviantart is...nyeh, ok I guess-so much junk though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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