Nexev Posted May 1, 2010 Report Share Posted May 1, 2010 So is this a prolouge to how the Deus family was founded? Are any of the other 13 menbers of the orgy going to show up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2010 Not exactly, Nexev. And by orgy, I think you ment organization... well, maybe in Chapter 11. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2010 Chapter 11 added. Also, I put the link for the song mentioned in the chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted May 1, 2010 Report Share Posted May 1, 2010 So it WAS organization XIII. I knew it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 I thought the whole name "Organization XIV" showed that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 Heheh... I see now... Nice chapter, once again. And I love it because it's frikin good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted May 3, 2010 Report Share Posted May 3, 2010 OMFG I'm online in the morning...miracle. It was good but the movie/song efrences weren't enirely necessary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2010 Chase, if you had notice, all the Chapter's name are also Music songs names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 3, 2010 Report Share Posted May 3, 2010 Nice fight scene... A bit dialogue-heavy, but other than that, I like the ending. Can't wait for the weird version of ch 13. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2010 Lol, It is a fight, and it should have verbal agression. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted May 3, 2010 Report Share Posted May 3, 2010 Well, umm...Demma is a little strange looking, since I didn't read Chapter 10 before now. And, ummm, yeah, how long are you gonna keep Stuart around? ...blue eye? Really? Anyway...so, when are you gonna title a chapter "Lucy in the Sky With Diamonds" and another named "Helter Sketler" and then "Me and Bobby McGee." Oh, and "Mercedez Benz."Nice, face punch. Classic, Epic, nice way to end a chapter I KNOW THAT ONE!Green hair, perfect. I LOL'dAfter that...not as epic as the others. Still good though, 'specially the fight scene. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2010 Probably never, since they aren't really good titles. And stuart was just another weird element in the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scatty Posted May 4, 2010 Report Share Posted May 4, 2010 Dude, you're good... But when are you actually going to let Deus be killed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2010 In the day that Cookies aren't yummy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scatty Posted May 4, 2010 Report Share Posted May 4, 2010 Go to hell... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted May 4, 2010 Report Share Posted May 4, 2010 I've been there, actually. It's quite lovely this time of year... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2010 Go to hell...Had already been there, it has an excellent weather during this time of year. And the people are so friendly. Anyway, Chapter 13 added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted May 4, 2010 Report Share Posted May 4, 2010 Deus isn't allowed in hell, it's my summer home and if he went there it probbaly would wind up exploded somehow. Then it's realstate value goes down and I'd have to go back to eating people for food to avoid actually getting a job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2010 Of course I'm allowed, everytime I go there, they ask me to screw with heaven. But how can I screw with something that I don't know where is it? It is hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scatty Posted May 6, 2010 Report Share Posted May 6, 2010 You don't know where it is, but you DO know that it doesn't exist. And that's why the Bible is a fantasy book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 Chapter 14 added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 Hell's very nice what with the pool they have at the Atlantis hotel. It's not hot due to the giant AC unit they installed last time I visited my relatives. 14was good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 The pool thing was related to this, http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/pools-closed, Chase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 HAHAHAHAHAH XD Genius... LU5T... FL4ME XD Great chapter. Truly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted May 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 FL4M3, actually, but I get your point. And thank you for liking this fiction that much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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