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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Spell or Trap cards on your side of the field to the Graveyard, as long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you can draw 2 extra cards every other turn, During your Main Phase, if this is the only card on your side of the field it is Destroyed.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Τhis card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Spell or Trap Cards on your side of the field to the Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you can draw an 2 cards during your Draw Phase. During your Main Phase, if this is the only card on your side of the field it is Destroyed

 

Not bad at all...some OCG errors...but it's good! 8/10

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"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying 2 Spell or Trap Cards on your field. During each turn, you can draw 2 cards. If this card is the only monster you control, it is destroyed."

 

That is correct, anyway:

1st: That wasn't the card that I wanted to see.

2nd: You need to use . as well.

Your rate is 4/10

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Τhis card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Spell or Trap Cards on your side of the field to the Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field' date=' you can draw an 2 cards [b']during your Draw Phase[/b]. During your Main Phase, if this is the only card on your side of the field it is Destroyed

 

Not bad at all...some OCG errors...but it's good! 8/10

 

I agree with the OCG correction, except that I think that there should be a comma after "field" in the last sentence.

 

5/10 Because you had some pretty reckless OCG and the effect isn't very creative.

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Just noticed..

ANY-M is not a correct set ID. "ANY" being the set is OK, I guess, but the set ID need to be EN001 (First card in the set being EN001, second being EN002, ect), as that is the way real cards are numbered. Also, "LIMITED" isn't a circulation. Try "Limited Edition" or "LIMITED EDITION". I'm not sure which is correct.

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