Newest E-Hero monsters!!! commenttttt

[Ghoulish]

Hey these are most of my E hero cards its taking me to long to post all so the fusions are in an other post, most of these cards are designed to support quick fusion summoning, tell me what u think as usual dont just write awful or ocg errors if the are erors then specify thx comment and rate =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

While this card is in your Hand, Deck or Graveyard it is treated as a level 3 Normal "Elemental Hero" monster. If this card is on your side of the field while you control another face-up "Elemental hero" monster than this card cannot be selected as an attack target by your opponent's monsters. Once per turn As long as this card remains face-up on the field you can remove from play from your Deck 1 Fusion Material monster that is listed on an "Elemental Hero" Fusion Monster, if you remove the material monster from play than it is treated as being in your Hand allowing it to be sent to the Graveyard for a Fusion Summon.

 

 

Once per turn you can send 1 "Polymerisation" Spell Card from your Graveyard or Deck to your remove from play area, during your 2nd Standby Phase after this cards activation add the removed card to your Hand, if this card is still face up on your side of the field when you add the removed card to your Hand then destroy this card.

 

 

When this card is summoned to the field remove from play 1 Spell card from your Graveyard to return to your Hand from your Graveyard 1 "Elemental Hero" monster card that was used for the Fusion Summon of another "Elemental Hero" monster. Until the End phase of this turn this card gains half the ATK of the added monster.

 

 

You can Tribute Summon this card by tributing 1 EARTH "Elemental Hero" monster. If you do this, this card gains 600 ATK. Once per turn you may discard 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 2000 ATK or less EARTH "Elemental Hero" monster from your Graveyard.

 

 

When this card is summoned to the field all Fusion monsters on your side of the field gain 500 ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard return either 1 "Elemental Hero" monster to your Hand or 1 "Polymerisation" to your Deck or 2 Fusion monsters to your Fusion Deck from your Graveyard. While this card is in your Graveyard during each of your Standby Phases pay 500 Life Points to increae the ATK of all "Elemental Hero" monsters by 500.

 

 

You can discard this card from your hand to the Graveyard to add from your Deck to your hand 1 "Skyscraper" or "Skyscraper 2 - Hero City" Spell Card. While "Skyscraper" or "Skyscraper 2 - Hero City" is on your side of the field then you can tribute this face-up card to add 1 level 4 or Lower "Elemental Hero" monster from your deck to your hand.

 

 

Once while this card is face-up on the field send 1 "Elemental Hero" monster from your Deck to your Graveyard to have this card gain ATK equal to the sent monsters Original ATK until the End Phase. During the turn you activated this effect this card cannot inflict battle damage to your opponent.

 

 

"Elemental Hero Sparkman" + "Elemental Hero Bubbleman"

This card can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. If this card is the only monster on your side of the field when it is summoned then draw 2 cards from your Deck. When this card attacks an opponent's face-up monster switch it to either DEF or ATK Position, opposite to what it was prior, this card gains ATK equal to Half of your opponent's monster's ATK or DEF depending on its position until your End Phase. When this card is attacked by an opponent's monster unless the monster in a WATER or LIGHT monster this card loses 500 ATK.

 

 

Every time an "Elemental Hero" monster is Fusion Summoned increase this cards ATK by 300. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle add 1 Level 3 or lower Normal "Elemental Hero" monster card from your Deck to your hand.

[Ghoulish]

umm comments?

[NeosWiseman]

Although I'm kinda sick of all these heroes ;-) , I can say your cards are really nice.

I just think that the Barbarian doesn't really fit the whole Hero Set.

Anyway, the pics are nice, no OCG mistakes as far as I could see.

The Spark Conductor is my favourite!

Good job!

10/10

Keep it up! :-)

[Ghoulish]

thx =) yea i think that maybe barbarian should have been made into a DARK monster and instead a destiony hero monster =) thx foir the comment and rate

[GraveHorizon]

Damn it, maadd. You keep sucking up all my time. Here's what I got from your OCG, I'll return later to actually rate the cards.

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[spoiler=Prototype]This card is also treated as a [Level 3 "Elemental Hero"] Normal Monster. While you control another face-up "Elemental Hero" monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Fusion Material Monster that is listed on an "Elemental Hero" Fusion Monster Card from your Deck. {While you control this face-up card,} That monster is also treated as if in your hand and can be sent to the Graveyard to be used for a Fusion Summon.

 

 

[spoiler=Accelerator]Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 "Polymerization" Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard. During your 2nd Standby Phase after activation, add the removed card to your hand and destroy this face-up card.

 

 

[spoiler=Wing]When this card is Summoned, remove from play 1 Spell Card in your Graveyard to add 1 "Elemental Hero" that was used for the Fusion Summon of an "Elemental Hero" Fusion Monster from your Graveyard to your hand; this card gains ATK equal to half the ATK of the added monster, until the End Phase.

 

 

[spoiler=Barbarian]You can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 "Elemental Hero" EARTH monster. If you do, this card gains 600 ATK. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Hero" EARTH monster with 2000 or less ATK from your Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=Booster]When this card is Summoned, all Fusion monsters you control gain 500 ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, return either 1 "Elemental Hero" monster to your hand, 1 "Polymerization" to your Deck, or 2 Fusion monsters to your Extra Deck from your Graveyard. If this card is in your Graveyard during your Standby Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to have all "Elemental Hero" monsters gain 500 ATK.

 

 

[spoiler=General Scraper]You can discard this card to the Graveyard to add 1 "Skyscraper" or "Skyscraper 2 - Hero City" from your Deck to your hand. While "Skyscraper" or "Skyscraper 2 - Hero City" is face-up on your side of the field, you can Tribute this face-up card to add 1 Level 4 or lower "Elemental Hero" monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=Giant]While this card is face-up on the field, one time only, send 1 "Elemental Hero" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard to have this card gain ATK equal to the sent monster's original ATK, until the End Phase. During the turn you activate this effect, your opponent takes no Battle Damage from this card.

 

 

[spoiler=Spark Conductor]"Elemental Hero Sparkman" + "Elemental Hero Bubbleman"

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card is Special Summoned, if it is the only monster you control, draw 2 cards. When this card attacks [a face-up monster], you can change the battle position of the attack target. This card gains ATK equal to half the ATK or DEF of the attack target depending on its position, until the End Phase. When this card is attacked by a non-WATER or non-LIGHT monster, this card loses 500 ATK.

 

 

[spoiler=Hammer]This card gains 300 ATK each time an "Elemental Hero" monster is Fusion Summoned. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, add 1 Level 3 or lower "Elemental Hero" Normal Monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

[LourDeath]

or maybe make another archetype..... give them another name...

other than tha.... I LIKE THE PICTURES!!!!!

[Zektor]

pictures fit good 9/10 prettygood

[Ghoulish]

Damn it' date=' maadd. You keep sucking up all my time. Here's what I got from your OCG, I'll return later to actually rate the cards.

[spoiler=Prototype']This card is also treated as a Level 3 "Elemental Hero" Normal Monster. While you control another face-up "Elemental Hero" monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Fusion Material Monster that is listed on an "Elemental Hero" Fusion Monster Card from your Deck. That monster is also treated as if in your hand and can be sent to the Graveyard to be used for a Fusion Summon.

 

 

[spoiler=Accelerator]Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 "Polymerization" Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard. During your 2nd Standby Phase after activation, add the removed card to your hand and destroy this face-up card.

 

 

[spoiler=Wing]When this card is Summoned, remove from play 1 Spell Card in your Graveyard to add 1 "Elemental Hero" that was used for the Fusion Summon of an "Elemental Hero" Fusion Monster from your Graveyard to your hand; this card gains half the ATK of the added monster, until the End Phase.

 

 

[spoiler=Barbarian]You can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 "Elemental Hero" EARTH monster. If you do, this card gains 600 ATK. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Hero" EARTH monster with 2000 or less ATK from your Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=Booster]When this card is Summoned, all Fusion monsters you control gain 500 ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, return either 1 "Elemental Hero" monster to your hand, 1 "Polymerization" to your Deck, or 2 Fusion monsters to your Fusion Deck from your Graveyard. If this card is in your Graveyard during your Standby Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to have all "Elemental Hero" monsters gain 500 ATK.

 

 

[spoiler=General Scraper]You can discard this card to the Graveyard to add 1 "Skyscraper" or "Skyscraper 2 - Hero City" from your Deck to your hand. While "Skyscraper" or "Skyscraper 2 - Hero City" is face-up on your side of the field, you can Tribute this face-up card to add 1 Level 4 or lower "Elemental Hero" monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=Giant]While this card is face-up on the field, one time only, send 1 "Elemental Hero" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard to have this card gain ATK equal to the sent monster's original ATK, until the End Phase. During the turn you activate this effect, your opponent takes no Battle Damage from this card.

 

 

[spoiler=Spark Conductor]"Elemental Hero Sparkman" + "Elemental Hero Bubbleman"

This card can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. When this card is Summoned, if it is the only monster you control, draw 2 cards. When this card attacks an opponent's face-up monster, change the battle position of that monster, and this card gains ATK equal to half that monster's ATK or DEF depending on its position, until the End Phase. When this card is attacked by a non-WATER or non-LIGHT monster, this card loses 500 ATK.

 

 

[spoiler=Hammer]This card gains 300 ATK each time an "Elemental Hero" monster is Fusion Summoned. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, add 1 Level 3 or lower "Elemental Hero" Normal Monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

yea i know my problem is i dont research the ocg for everything, i type it up and if it makes sense then i go with it, of course ive learned some capitalizing and phrases but imbot 100% there yet, if you look as the first set i ever made (Heavens ARmy Deck) im pretty sure ull see a huge improve,ment. And what do u mean "sucking up" in what way?, ecplain would be nice like u did with the ocg errors.

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or maybe make another archetype..... give them another name...

other than tha.... I LIKE THE PICTURES!!!!!

 

do u mean from these cards make another archtype? cause the main purpose was e-hero support' date=' or do u mean start a new archtype in general cause im well under way in my new "Light Angel" set which i think is done pretty well OCG wise. When i can get it uploaded ill post anyway thx for the comments evveryone[hr']

Damn it' date=' maadd. You keep sucking up all my time. Here's what I got from your OCG, I'll return later to actually rate the cards.

[spoiler=Prototype']This card is also treated as a Level 3 "Elemental Hero" Normal Monster. While you control another face-up "Elemental Hero" monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Fusion Material Monster that is listed on an "Elemental Hero" Fusion Monster Card from your Deck. That monster is also treated as if in your hand and can be sent to the Graveyard to be used for a Fusion Summon.

 

 

[spoiler=Accelerator]Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 "Polymerization" Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard. During your 2nd Standby Phase after activation, add the removed card to your hand and destroy this face-up card.

 

 

[spoiler=Wing]When this card is Summoned, remove from play 1 Spell Card in your Graveyard to add 1 "Elemental Hero" that was used for the Fusion Summon of an "Elemental Hero" Fusion Monster from your Graveyard to your hand; this card gains half the ATK of the added monster, until the End Phase.

 

 

[spoiler=Barbarian]You can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 "Elemental Hero" EARTH monster. If you do, this card gains 600 ATK. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Hero" EARTH monster with 2000 or less ATK from your Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=Booster]When this card is Summoned, all Fusion monsters you control gain 500 ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, return either 1 "Elemental Hero" monster to your hand, 1 "Polymerization" to your Deck, or 2 Fusion monsters to your Fusion Deck from your Graveyard. If this card is in your Graveyard during your Standby Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to have all "Elemental Hero" monsters gain 500 ATK.

 

 

[spoiler=General Scraper]You can discard this card to the Graveyard to add 1 "Skyscraper" or "Skyscraper 2 - Hero City" from your Deck to your hand. While "Skyscraper" or "Skyscraper 2 - Hero City" is face-up on your side of the field, you can Tribute this face-up card to add 1 Level 4 or lower "Elemental Hero" monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=Giant]While this card is face-up on the field, one time only, send 1 "Elemental Hero" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard to have this card gain ATK equal to the sent monster's original ATK, until the End Phase. During the turn you activate this effect, your opponent takes no Battle Damage from this card.

 

 

[spoiler=Spark Conductor]"Elemental Hero Sparkman" + "Elemental Hero Bubbleman"

This card can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. When this card is Summoned, if it is the only monster you control, draw 2 cards. When this card attacks an opponent's face-up monster, change the battle position of that monster, and this card gains ATK equal to half that monster's ATK or DEF depending on its position, until the End Phase. When this card is attacked by a non-WATER or non-LIGHT monster, this card loses 500 ATK.

 

 

[spoiler=Hammer]This card gains 300 ATK each time an "Elemental Hero" monster is Fusion Summoned. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, add 1 Level 3 or lower "Elemental Hero" Normal Monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

also i think maybe u might wanna reword ur version of spark conductor?

[White Hollow]

errors pointed

9/10

[GraveHorizon]

yea i know my problem is i dont research the ocg for everything' date=' i type it up and if it makes sense then i go with it, of course ive learned some capitalizing and phrases but imbot 100% there yet, if you look as the first set i ever made (Heavens ARmy Deck) im pretty sure ull see a huge improve,ment. And what do u mean "sucking up" in what way?, ecplain would be nice like u did with the ocg errors.

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It's nothing, really. When I see custom card text, I naturally try to make it sound as realistic/professional as possible. Almost like a compulsion for me. And this is the third or fourth time I've chosen to view your cards, I just couldn't leave it alone. ^3^;; I actually spent a few hours just trying to figure out how to word the OCG. Some might think it's not a big deal, but it's not a Realistic card if it doesn't sound realistic, right? In any case, OCG is somewhat important in my eyes, so I do what I can to reach the best wording possible, whenever I can. I've got to go to bed right now, but I'll try to rate these cards when I come back. See ya.

 

EDIT: Yeah, I can reword my version, I'll try when I come back. I didn't feel great on that one, not much precedent to be found.

[Ghoulish]

ahk i see what u mean now yea lol soz bout the ocg always being crap, did u know a web that has the official ocg?

[GraveHorizon]

ahk i see what u mean now yea lol soz bout the ocg always being crap' date=' did u know a web that has the official ocg?

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netrep.net is what I use to search card text, and yugioh.wikia.com has multiple (better) card images to compare.

 

Here's what I got after going over Spark Conductor again. If you're going with the Summoning condition of an "Elemental Hero" Fusion Monster, it should be "cannot be Special Summoned except by". The difference is if you use "only" instead of "except", it means that it can be Special Summoned, but only after you Summon it properly first. "Except" means Fusion Summon is the only way, period. All Fusion/Ritual/Synchro Monsters come with the built in condition of having to be Summoned through their normal methods before being Special Summoned from the Graveyard or RFP zone, so if you mean the other way ("only"), you don't have to put it on the card.

[spoiler=Spark Conductor]"Elemental Hero Sparkman" + "Elemental Hero Bubbleman"

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card is Special Summoned, if it is the only monster you control, draw 2 cards. When this card attacks [a face-up monster], you can change the battle position of the attack target. This card gains ATK equal to half the ATK or DEF of the attack target depending on its position, until the End Phase. When this card is attacked by a non-WATER or non-LIGHT monster, this card loses 500 ATK.

 

 

I got the first half of the attack effect from VWXYZ-Dragon. Kind of old but it sounds okay. Still not sure on the use of the "a face-up monster" part, so I put it in brackets. Is it super important that the target be face-up?

 

About your other cards:

As a whole, they are kind of overpowered. ATK boosts all across the board, and usually permanent, and returning/Summoning cards like crazy. Some of the pictures look more like giant robots than Elemental Heroes. I like the pics of Barbarian and Spark Conductor the best, though Barbarian does look like a DARK monster.

 

Prototype is an okay monster I guess, but since he's already a Level 3 and "Elemental Hero" monster, you could probably cut those parts out of his effect. His effect to allow the RFP monster to be used for a Fusion Summon might be more even if it only worked while Prototype itself was still on the field. 8/10

Accelerator is great. It works because if he's destroyed you don't get the card back, so no one can really complain. And with that wording ("Polymerization" Spell Card), you would also be able to target "Super Polymerization". 10/10

Armour Wing (are you British?) is also fair, as it only gets its effect when Summoned and only when you have a Spell to remove. And it would suck if it's a Spell you plan on reusing, since you're required to remove it if you Summon him. 9/10

Barbarian pretty much gives you a free Summon, and can totally be abused with Booster, or even itself. A little broken. 7/10

Booster can likewise be abused with Barbarian, and its ability to permanently increase your Heroes ATK would piss off any opponent. While only applying to Fusion Heroes is great for the first part, it might even things out to end the boost at the End Phase for the second part. 7/10

General Scraper is entirely fair, nothing wrong with him at all. Field searcher and regular searcher, at the cost of himself. It all works out. 9.5/10

Giant is another fair monster, since it only works once and your opponent isn't damaged. Good for that quick boost, while thinning the Deck for other cards. 8.5/10

Spark Conductor, aside from having complicated wording issues, is decent. Nice Bubbleman upgrade and Spark Blaster combination, it suits it well. And the -500 brings some balance to the other ATK raising effects. 8/10

Hammer is good because of its specific conditions, so not too much room for abuse with him. 9/10

 

Also, I changed my corrections of Armour Wing ("gains ATK equal to half"), Booster ("Extra Deck"), Prototype (added brackets and an optional condition), and Spark Conductor (rewrote).

[Ghoulish]

wow thx for the comments and rates and all round help and the website and for basically posing the most useful posts ever lol thx heaps mate =)

[Adogadog8]

Perfect backup for the real thing, only problem is some of them arent *elements* of the earth or atmosphere

Hand=hand

Accelerator is good, yours i like just as much as mine, because urs are real backup for things like polymerization

[Card_Critic24]

Always a lover of Heors! cept you barbarian card. make it an evil hero.

[Ghoulish]

Always a lover of Heors! cept you barbarian card. make it an evil hero.

 

ok so uve comment of 2 of my posts and theyve both been heros so u automatically asume i only make heros... sad much?

[MibeR]

Hand should hand..

 

thre it is,,8/10,,i like whole cards except barbarian..

[brillewan1]

cool cards!:D [/color]

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cards 10/10

[Ghoulish]

Hand should hand..

 

thre it is' date=',8/10,,i like whole cards except barbarian..

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no im pretty sure Hand is tyhe correct one =)

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cool cards!:D [/color]

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cards 10/10

 

thx =)

[jdboyle10]

where did you get spark conductor pic that'll be my new wallpaper

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lookin good