~|Ancient Undead Demigod|~|古代には亜神アンデッド|~|4 Stars MFO|~|ProSora|~

[ProSora]

this is my four star card ;D

if you want jap cards or any edits on this card check out my shop or pm me

and if you've seen my other card "Soul Keepers" you notice an effect bridge

 

Image Credit: Alcander

 

[align=center]Ancient Undead Demigod

DARK/Level 8/Zombie-Type/Effect/ATK 2900/DEF 1000/Gold Rare

 

 

Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can only Special Summon this card while it is in the Graveyard. You can Special Summon this card by removing from play 2 Zombie-Type monsters you control. Once per turn you can discard 1 card to Set 1 removed from play Spell or Trap Card. If this card destroys a card by battle you gain Life Points equal to half of the destroyed monster's DEF Points. If this card enters a battle with a LIGHT monster, destroy the LIGHT monster without implying damage calculation. There can only be 1 "Undead Demigod" face-up on the field.[/align]

[ProSora]

bump

[Altaïr]

Turn

and i might instead "without implying" to "ignoring" the rest of the lore you dont have to do tha but i sugest

9.5/10!

[Alcander]

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect. You can Special Summon this card by removing 2 Zombie-Type monsters you control from play. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Set 1 of your removed from play Spell or Trap Card. If this card destroys a monster by battle gain Life Points equal to half of the destroyed monster's DEF. If this card battles with a LIGHT monster, destroy the LIGHT monster without applying damage calculation. There can only be 1 "Undead Demigod" face-up on the field."

 

Well I made some corrections, don't get my wrong, I'm not saying it's the correct way, I've changed the 4th effect a bit to stop to being a bit OP'ed. I rather like this card's effect, it would be crusial againts a LIGHT Deck but I would decrease his ATK and DEF a bit :/

[ProSora]

@Mason: well i dont really think its that big of a deal its still correct

 

@Alcander: i really dont see the difference besides one of the summoning condition

 

both of you thanks for your comments =D

[Alcander]

@Mason: well i dont really think its that big of a deal its still correct

 

@Alcander: i really dont see the difference besides one of the summoning condition

 

both of you thanks for your comments =D

Well, you know... anytime you want ^^ that's why there are friends.

BTW did you read the correction? D: 'cause some changes are really different.

[-DOOM]

This is Alcander's Image =O Not mine xD

[Alcander]

This is Alcander's Image =O Not mine xD

O.o OMG I didn't noticed it -.- anyways ProSora If you want an image don't doubt to ask for it. I'll stop flooding your post >_<

[Cloister]

Hey HP, long time no see...

 

Lol, it is Alcander's pic? He didn't even comment on that!

 

It is pretty hard to Summon since the only place it can be summoned from is the Graveyard.

 

High ATK to balance out the loss of effects... A bit OPed, but good that you cannot control more than 1!

 

Overall, good.

[Cloister]

This is Alcander's Image =O Not mine xD

O.o OMG I didn't noticed it -.- anyways ProSora If you want an image don't doubt to ask for it. I'll stop flooding your post >_<

 

Yeah xD it's mine but the holo-thing on the picture wasn't from me. :/

 

You did a great job on stop flooding. #_< Ofc, I'm kidding.

 

Nah, I don't know about the card, if I was to rate it I would give it 8/10. Not anything that is really special about it tbh.

[ProSora]

lol thanks you guys i didnt know it was alcander's pic, i must have got confused

sorry about that o.o

and you can flood my threads all you want xD

 

thanks for rating everyone

[Phœnīcius Infīnius VII]

I'm very leaniant and not so nerdish jerk face when it comes to ratings. ANd I have not been here in a long time so i'm a bit rusty.

 

I rate this 10/10. "A" MayXing

I can't wait to get my old computer fixed so I can start making everything again. Good job my friend.

[ProSora]

thanks for you rating

[賢狼ホロ]

I must point out that the Japanese is all wrong. Google-translated I suppose? (Cards are not written is polite Japanese as this is ;p)

Most disturbing is that the name of the card is like "During the ancient times demigod 'Undead'".

"には" should not be there ; D

 

I think the card is quite balanced and all, over and all a great card.

[ProSora]

I must point out that the Japanese is all wrong. Google-translated I suppose? (Cards are not written is polite Japanese as this is ;p)

Most disturbing is that the name of the card is like "During the ancient times demigod 'Undead'".

"には" should not be there ; D

 

I think the card is quite balanced and all' date=' over and all a great card.

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lol thanks for telling me that +1 xD

and would you recommended any translator cuz you got it spot on o.o

and lol at the name o.o

 

if you couldnt tell by now i cant read japanese o.o

in all thanks for your comment :D

[賢狼ホロ]

lol thanks for telling me that +1 xD

and would you recommended any translator cuz you got it spot on o.o

and lol at the name o.o

 

if you couldnt tell by now i cant read japanese o.o

in all thanks for your comment :D

 

I only know of Google, sorry. I am not using translators anyway. : p

But as 99,9% of the people of YCM do not know Japanese you will get away with Google anyway, unless I find your thread. ; P

[ProSora]

I only know of Google' date=' sorry. I am not using translators anyway. : p

But as 99,9% of the people of YCM do not know Japanese you will get away with Google anyway, unless I find your thread. ; P

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lol alright, so i guess ill continue what im doing xD