Super Spellcaster Fusion-Leave comments!

[Tunerwizard]

I always wanted to create a fusion with time wizard so i thought that turning him into a spellcaster would be just awesomely amazing. Plz rate on my card and leave any comments on OCG errors and anything else you see that i should probably change.THX! :)

 

 

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LORE:

Time Wizard + Skilled Dark Magician + Magician's Valkria

This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards that target it. If this card attacks your opponent directly and is destroyed by a card effect, draw 2 cards and return 1 card in either player's Graveyard to the owner's deck. If this card attacks successfully, decrease it's ATK by 150 at the end of the Battle Phase. If any of this card's effects activate, put the top card from your opponent's deck to the bottom of their deck.

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First of all, you may want to create a Spell or Trap Card to help in its Fusion, because it will be slightly difficult having all three of those Fusion Material Monsters all at once. As well, the effect of this monster itself is pretty underpowered from its requirements to Summon it.

 

Secondly, you spelled "Forgotten" wrong, as well as "Valkyria" in "Magician's Valkyria".

 

This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Trap Cards that designate it as a target. If this card is destroyed by a card effect when it attacks your opponent directly, draw 2 cards and return 1 card in either player's Graveyard to their respective player's Deck. If this card successfully attacks your opponent directly, it loses 150 ATK at the end of the Battle Phase. If this card has any of its effects activated, send the top card of your opponent's Deck to the bottom of their Deck.

 

That should be much better.

[Tunerwizard]

First of all' date=' you may want to create a Spell or Trap Card to help in its Fusion, because it will be slightly difficult having all three of those Fusion Material Monsters all at once. As well, the effect of this monster itself is pretty underpowered from its requirements to Summon it.

 

Secondly, you spelled "Forgotten" wrong, as well as "Valkyria" in "Magician's Valkyria".

 

This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Trap Cards that designate it as a target. If this card is destroyed by a card effect when it attacks your opponent directly, draw 2 cards and return 1 card in either player's Graveyard to their respective player's Deck. If this card successfully attacks your opponent directly, it loses 150 ATK at the end of the Battle Phase. If this card has any of its effects activated, send the top card of your opponent's Deck to the bottom of their Deck.

 

That should be much better.

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oops i forgot the Y in valkyria and put an extra g in forgotten(stupid keyboarding errors!) anyways thanx for actually posting something on my thread unlike some of these unhelpful people, also you get a rep just for posting! MAYBE this will encourage others to reply or...NOT!

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Im going to update this thread tommorow with a support card and fixed OCG so dont critique either of those plz:)