Clair Posted April 22, 2010 Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 [align=center]I was making cards, and I decided to make a set. Surprising, no? The Voltanian Archetype focuses on Special Summoning its monsters to the field. If you get enough monsters, you can activate "Voltanian Unleashed", this Archetype's trump card. So yeah. Enjoy and stuff. <3 Note that I will only accept helpful praise comments. Anybody who just came here to ogle at the pictures, post a rate, and leave can gtfo now. Don't waste your time~ ^^ Also note that I could care less about OCG. If it makes sense, who cares? Monsters [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Buster Squadron[/b]] Effect: You can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon, except for "Voltanian" monsters. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this Attack Position card is destroyed by battle, select and Special Summon 1 "Voltanian Buster Squadron" from your Deck to your field. [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Scrap Material[/b]] Effect: You can discard this card to the Graveyard to add 1 "Voltanian" Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. [spoiler=[b]Hypercharged Voltanian[/b]] Effect: If you control a face-up Thunder-Type monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up Attack Position. When this card is Summoned successfully, you can reveal the top card of your Deck. If it is a Level 6 or lower Monster Card, Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. If the card is not a Level 6 or lower Monster Card, remove that card and this card from play. [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Dynamo[/b]] Effect: If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle, add it to your Deck and shuffle it. [spoiler=[color=red]Voltanian Swiftstriker[/color]] Effect: While you control another "Voltanian" monster with a different name, destroy any monster this card attacks at the end of the Damage Step. If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy another "Voltanian" monster you control instead. If you control a face-up "Voltanian Generator", this card gains 600 ATK. [spoiler=[color=red]Voltanian Scarecrow[/color]] Effect: When a "Voltanian" monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up Attack Position. You can discard 1 "Voltanian" Spell Card from your hand to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. If you do, remove this card from play when it is removed from the field. [spoiler=[color=red]Divine Voltanian Drago[/color]] Effect: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Voltanian Protector Seal". One per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can remove from play 1 Field Spell from your Deck. This card's name is treated as that card's name, and it gains that card's effect(s). You can skip your Battle Phase to add up to 2 "Voltanian" monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=[color=red]Voltanian Burst Pillar[/color]] Effect: 1 "Voltanian" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, it is changed to Defense Position. When this Defense Position monster is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, add 2 "Voltanian" Spell Cards in your Graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=[color=blue]Voltanian Avenger[/color]] Effect: When an effect is activated that would destroy a "Voltanian" monster you control, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Special Summoned successfully, negate that effect and destroy the card. This card can only be used to Synchro Summon a "Voltanian" monster. [spoiler=[color=blue]Voltanian Knuckle Duster[/color]] Effect: When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, destroy up to 2 cards on the field. Add "Voltanian" monsters from your Graveyard to your hand equal to the number of cards you destroyed. [spoiler=[color=blue]Voltanian Drainer[/color]] Effect: If this card is added to your hand from your Deck by the effect of a Spell, Trap or Monster Card, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, select 1 "Voltanian" monster on the field. Increase the Level of this card by the Level of the selected monster, until the End Phase. This card can only be used for the Synchro Summon of a "Voltanian" monster. [spoiler=[color=blue]Voltanian Dragoon[/color]] Effect: 1 Thunder-Type Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can remove 1 "Voltanian" monster in your Graveyard from play. If you activate this effect, this card gains 1000 ATK until the End Phase. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, return 1 card on the field to the top of its owner's Deck and draw 1 card. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can add 1 "Voltanian Generator" from your Deck to your hand. Spells [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Generator[/b]] Effect: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all face-up "Voltanian" monsters on the field are changed to Attack Position and cannot change their Battle Position. All face-up "Voltanian" monsters gain ATK equal to their Level x300. When a "Voltanian" monster is Summoned, place 1 Power Counter on this card. (max. 8 ) You can remove Power Counters from this card to add 1 "Voltanian" monster from your Deck to your hand whose Level is equal to the number of Power Counters removed. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove all Power Counters from this card instead. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, destroy all "Voltanian" monsters on the field. [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Force[/b]] Effect: Activate only when a face-up "Voltanian" monster you control is selected as an attack target and you control 2 or more "Voltanian" monsters. Destroy all Attack Position monsters your opponent controls. [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Thunder Spring[/b]] Effect: "Voltanian" monsters cannot be destroyed by battle. When a "Voltanian" monster is destroyed by a card effect, gain Life Points equal to that monster's Level x200. [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Unleashed[/b]] Effect: Activate only when you control 5 face-up Attack Position "Voltanian" monsters. Destroy all cards your opponent controls, and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards destroyed x500. [spoiler=[color=red]Voltanian Protector Seal[/color]] Effect: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Divine Voltanian Drago". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 8 or more from the field or your hand. During your Main Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard. If you activate this effect, you take no Battle Damage this turn. [spoiler=[color=blue]Voltanian Production Pod[/color]] Effect: You can only control 1 "Voltanian Production Pod" Spell Card. Once per turn, if your opponent controls more monsters than you do, Special Summon 1 "Voltanian Drone Token" (Thunder-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in face-up Attack Position. If there are no "Voltanian" monsters in your Graveyard, destroy this card. During your End Phase, destroy all face-up "Voltanian Drone Tokens" you control. All Image Credit goes to HP Doom and Jazin Kay.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Marluxia~ Posted April 23, 2010 Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 10/10........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted April 23, 2010 Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 Finally, a set in the Realistic Cards section that doesn't make me upchuck my lunch. It's rare to come by nowadays. A very good set, with very great concept, and pics that are fun to look at. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted April 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 Thanks, Mar. And thanks, Fuzzie. I'm sure there are better cards than mine, though. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted April 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 Bump. Comments, RC? D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted April 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 One more bump. Trap cards coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 is voltanian unleashed meant to be a field spell?other then that, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted April 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 is voltanian unleashed meant to be a field spell?other then that' date=' 9/10[/quote'] Thank you. ^^ But why would it be considered a Field Spell? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 is voltanian unleashed meant to be a field spell?other then that' date=' 9/10[/quote'] Thank you. ^^ But why would it be considered a Field Spell? because, well, it should be a quick play or normal. as a field spell it can be used again and again with no ristrictions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted April 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 is voltanian unleashed meant to be a field spell?other then that' date=' 9/10[/quote'] Thank you. ^^ But why would it be considered a Field Spell? because, well, it should be a quick play or normal. as a field spell it can be used again and again with no ristrictions. Good catch. <3 It was meant to be Quick-Play. Thanks. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 is voltanian unleashed meant to be a field spell?other then that' date=' 9/10[/quote'] Thank you. ^^ But why would it be considered a Field Spell? because, well, it should be a quick play or normal. as a field spell it can be used again and again with no ristrictions. Good catch. <3 It was meant to be Quick-Play. Thanks. ^^ no problem.......:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 Fantastic set. You really caught my interest, Clair. ^^ I don't see a needed OCG fix. But people will seriously need to cut down on stealing the artwork of DuelMasters. We don't want to see another episode like the one that inforced the disclaimer rule for the first time, do we? P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted April 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 Thank you, Lordy. ^^ Set updated! All updates are in red! 8D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted April 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 LOLBUMP. No comments, RC? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
賢狼ホロ Posted April 28, 2010 Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 Amazing cards! O.o(subscribes...) I could spot some OCG errors, but only a few! ; D [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Buster Squadron[/b]][... ]When this Attack Position card is destroyed by battle' date=' select and Special Summon 1 "Voltanian Buster Squadron" from your Deck to your field. [i']I have never heard the expression "select and Special Summon", is it not alright with just "Special Summon"?[/i] [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Scrap Material[/b]]You can discard this card to the Graveyard to add 1 "Voltanian" Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. Just "discard"! You always discard to the graveyard! If you want it to not work when Macro Cosmos is on the field, write "send" instead. [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Dynamo[/b]]If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle, add it to your Deck and shuffle it. The opponent controls "a monster(s)", as they may control more than one! ; D I am not sure whether you need to properly write "add it to your Deck and shuffle it"; Pot of Avarice for example only says "Return those cards to the Deck", but you will shuffle the deck anyway, right? [spoiler=[color=red]Voltanian Swiftstriker[/color]][...] If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy another "Voltanian" monster you control instead. [...] Double-space between "control" and "instead". [spoiler=[color=red]Divine Voltanian Drago[/color]][...] One per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can remove from play 1 Field Spell from your Deck. This card's name is treated as that card's name, and it gains that card's effect(s). [...] "Field Spell" -> "Field Spell Card" [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Force[/b]]Activate only when a face-up "Voltanian" monster you control is selected as an attack target and you control 2 or more "Voltanian" monsters. [...] Double space between "activate" and "only" ; ) [spoiler=[color=red]Voltanian Protector Seal[/color]][...] During your Main Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard. If you activate this effect, you take no Battle Damage this turn. I think it is better to phrase it like "During your Main Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard to make any Battle Damage you take this turn 0." At least, I think it should be one sentence, if not necessarily like that. >_> Way to go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jiro587 Posted April 28, 2010 Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 looks great =) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted April 28, 2010 Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 Actually, not, bad! I liked the set and the cards are pretty balanced... so i give it 8.5/10 L8z Clair ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted April 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2010 Amazing cards! O.o(subscribes...) I could spot some OCG errors' date=' but only a few! ; D [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Buster Squadron[/b]][... ]When this Attack Position card is destroyed by battle, select and Special Summon 1 "Voltanian Buster Squadron" from your Deck to your field. I have never heard the expression "select and Special Summon", is it not alright with just "Special Summon"? [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Scrap Material[/b]]You can discard this card to the Graveyard to add 1 "Voltanian" Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. Just "discard"! You always discard to the graveyard! If you want it to not work when Macro Cosmos is on the field, write "send" instead. [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Dynamo[/b]]If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle, add it to your Deck and shuffle it. The opponent controls "a monster(s)", as they may control more than one! ; D I am not sure whether you need to properly write "add it to your Deck and shuffle it"; Pot of Avarice for example only says "Return those cards to the Deck", but you will shuffle the deck anyway, right? [spoiler=[color=red]Voltanian Swiftstriker[/color]][...] If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy another "Voltanian" monster you control instead. [...] Double-space between "control" and "instead". [spoiler=[color=red]Divine Voltanian Drago[/color]][...] One per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can remove from play 1 Field Spell from your Deck. This card's name is treated as that card's name, and it gains that card's effect(s). [...] "Field Spell" -> "Field Spell Card" [spoiler=[b]Voltanian Force[/b]]Activate only when a face-up "Voltanian" monster you control is selected as an attack target and you control 2 or more "Voltanian" monsters. [...] Double space between "activate" and "only" ; ) [spoiler=[color=red]Voltanian Protector Seal[/color]][...] During your Main Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard. If you activate this effect, you take no Battle Damage this turn. I think it is better to phrase it like "During your Main Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard to make any Battle Damage you take this turn 0." At least, I think it should be one sentence, if not necessarily like that. >_> Way to go! I make sure my OCG is worded correctly by using the OCG of real cards. Sure, the errata might be out of date, but still. I'm not too concerned. Thank you for looking through these and helping me fix them. <3 looks great =) 9/10 lol thx dood. =) Actually' date=' not, bad! I liked the set and the cards are pretty balanced... so i give it 8.5/10 L8z Clair ;D[/quote'] You're back! <3 Thanks, Box. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted April 29, 2010 Report Share Posted April 29, 2010 these are some great cards. Good OCG and the pics are nice. Good. I don't have any problem with these.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted April 29, 2010 Report Share Posted April 29, 2010 I think the OCG is okay. Then again, I don't want to since that will take real long. But I didn't find much. So they are powerless unless they have these Spells? Cool, since they become incredible once you. It's not too hard to do either. I don't see many problems. They are easy to Summon, draw back is that they are quite weak. The Spells are the muscle. Now there just needs to be more traps and a BOSS monster. I usually rate harsh, but I like these a lot. So: 8.5/10 Good. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted June 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 [align=center] THIS THREAD HAS MUCH SHOVING, JOSTLING, AND BUMPING NOW. Updates in blue~[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 2, 2010 Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 I like this set. It has very nice Thunder support.Pics are epic.It kinda scares me that all the monsters have 0 ATK and DEF, but all the cards support each other in a way that compensates for that, so I like this set even more. 11/10These cards are outstanding! You deserve a rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted June 2, 2010 Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 I like the concept of this set, all the monsters having 0 ATK but they operate mostly on effects that allow them to deal Piercing Damage or attack directly. Great job, once again. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted June 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 I like this set. It has very nice Thunder support.Pics are epic.It kinda scares me that all the monsters have 0 ATK and DEF' date=' but all the cards support each other in a way that compensates for that, so I like this set even more. 11/10These cards are outstanding! You deserve a rep.[/quote'] Jazin Kay's Archive for pictures~ Yes. They can gain ATK with support, though. This is a Special Summoning archetype. <3 I like the concept of this set' date=' all the monsters having 0 ATK but they operate mostly on effects that allow them to deal Piercing Damage or attack directly. Great job, once again. 10/10[/quote'] Thank you. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted June 3, 2010 Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 This all looks just, wonderful Clair. All the cards seem rather balanced on their own, the OCG is better then what I could do, and the entire set is rather creative. Aside from this, there isn't much for me to offer... Besides telling you that I love the Ritual Monster Divine Voltanian Drago. You get a nice 10/10 from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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