JerryFreelance Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 This is my first Dark World support card, and I think it could have great potential. I plan on reviewing it in my reviews as soon as I get caught up, so if you don't understand the point of it now, wait, read the review, and then gape in awe at its astounding power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Very good but what color pun is it ?9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 OverUsed Pic!7/10!Nice Job!Btw Face Up needs to be Capatilized and Graveyard to! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 This is my first Dark World support card' date=' and I think it could have great potential. I plan on reviewing it in my reviews as soon as I get caught up, so if you don't understand the point of it now, wait, read the review, and then gape in awe at its astounding power. [img']http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8638/razeterrorizinghoundofdsu7.png[/img] DeckGraveyard 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Oh shiz I forgot about the color pun =/ Whatever... And I can't believe I forgot to do the Deck/Grave capitalization... But face-up isn't capitalized... I'm pretty sure... I'll fix it What do you think of the name "Aukra" [Ochre] for it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Great job! Exxcept those caps errors...8.883 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Yeah I don't see the point of it, guess I wont know until you post the rest of the set 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 wow man =/Deck and Graveyard need to be capitalized lol 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 w/e Keeping the name, but I did change the OCG Sorry, made this in a hurry... Derek, it's not in a set, but it has a couple good combos, so just wait for the review, and I'll post here when it comes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 how does this help dark world?? since its from the deck it wont help them at all unless u made another card to combo it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Good pic, raise level to 4, good effect, change to discard 1 card from your hand instead of the top of your deck. It is a Dark World monster. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 its not bad ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Good card, might be a cad of the day candidate ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted December 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 Whoops, forgot one part of the effect. Edited and re-posted... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 8/10 the "in order" was unnecessary Name:Blach? (black) the pic is full of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted December 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 'Twas what I was thinking... But I was thinking more along the lines of "blaque" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 It doesn't have to be a specific color though, (Reign-Beaux=rainbow and colorless from the anime) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted December 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 So then raze is fine? You think?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 yeah, could be a form of "haze" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted December 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 lol okay then Thanks bro :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 Nice. I can't wait for the review, so I can see it's full potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 I think a color pun is necessary, it makes the card more real since raze/haze isn't really a color. Blaque would be a good idea. Right now I don't see much of use for it, but maybe I'm missing something... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted December 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Okay, I'll change it to Blaque then As soon as I get caught up on reviews, I'll review it and post here once I've done that... Until then, any other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 thats very good i like it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobekid Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 u got some grammar mistakes but other than that, nice card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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