New Gateway Cards

[Senbanzakura]

Hello.

 

These a few new cards from my new Gateway set. Looking for OCG corrections.

 

Thanks for viewing ^^

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card. "Blessed Wishes" and by removing from play "Zena - Pera" "Vena - Sara" and "Mena - Mosa" from your deck, if these cards are in your graveyard this card cannot be Ritual Summoned. If this card is successfully Ritual Summoned, it's ATK and DEF becomes the total amount of cards removed from play X 1000 per card. If this card is removed from the field by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, all cards on your opponents side of the field are removed from play.

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No love T_T

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No love T_T

[Max Darkness]

The Ritual, for some reason, has [Fairy/Effect/Ritual] instead of [Fairy/Ritual/Effect] and also has half the Ritual Spell's effect on it. Alongside that, it automatically has 2000 ATK and if it's removed from the field (not just destroyed, simply removed), you RFP every card your opponent controls. Very overpowered. You could use "Different Dimension Gate" to RFP this card, and then completely blitz your opponent's field.

 

As for the "Talo" cards, why on earth would you use them? One throws itself to the Grave for 1000 LP, while the "Dark World" cards will do that for free and Summon themselves. And "Talo 9", firstly doesn't have an ATK/DEF changing effect, so why does it have ? ATK and DEF; and secondly, in an RFP Deck, which these would be used most commonly, you'll usually have a good number of removed from play cards due to "Macro Cosmos" and "D.D." monsters' effects, so when this card destroys itself, you could take upwards of 14,000 damage. Why?

 

2/10. These make no sense and are either overpowered or useless. Also, a colossal number of OCG errors.

[Senbanzakura]

These few cards are simply some out of the current set I'm constructing, I assure you that their effects are combined for other purposes. The ritual card is meant to say "Removed from play" I was simply seeking some advice on how to better the OCG, my set isn't done yet. I can see that some are over powered, but again, the effects they have are purposeful. Again, I was hoping to find someone who could better the OCG, not simply explain to me that there is OCG, I was more than aware there is OCG errors.