My new set Prototype set first 5 cards!!!needs some comments on my latest idea

[Ghoulish]

hey these are my 5 basic cards fro the prototype set, ive created the rest and ill explain them in detail when i can post the whole set, as usual dont just write awful oir ocg errors, if there are errors then plz specify, comment and rate=)

 

 

While you control a face-up "Prototype" monster, this card can be Special Summoned from your Hand or Graveyard by paying 200 Life Points during your Main Phase 1. If a "Prototype" monster or monsters on your side of the field would be destroyed by a card effect then tribute this card to negate the effect.

 

 

While you control a face-up "Prototype" monster, this card can be Special Summoned from your Hand or Graveyard by paying 200 Life Points during your Main Phase 1. When a face-up "Prototype" monster would be destroyed by battle you can tribute this card to take no battle damage from the battle. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon than it is removed from play.

 

 

While you control a face-up "Prototype" monster, this card can be Special Summoned from your Hand or Graveyard by paying 200 Life Points during your Main Phase 1. Whenever your opponent summons a monster decrease its ATK by 800 until the End Phase of your opponent's turn. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon then remove it from play.

 

 

While you control a face-up "Prototype" monster, this card can be Special Summoned from your Hand or Graveyard by paying 200 Life Points during your Main Phase 1. If a "Prototype" monster (other than this card) on your side of the field is destroyed by battle during your opponent's Battle Phase then tribute this card to end the Battle Phase immediatly.

 

 

While you control a face-up "Prototype" monster, this card can be Special Summoned from your Hand or Graveyard by paying 200 Life Points during your Main Phase 1. All "Prortotype" monsters on your side of the field gain 200 ATK and DEF for every "Prototype" monster on your side of the field.

[Ghoulish]

come on people need comments

[έκλειψη]

I don't feel like fixing OCG. These are decent overall.

8.5/10

[Chaos Flame]

A bit too strong seing how you can summon infinite as long as you have 1.

[GraveHorizon]

So you're including "E・Hero Prototype" in 2 different archetypes? Might have been better to use a slightly different picture, or at least mirror it. Okay, Prototypes can be SS by paying 200 while you have another Proto' monster. Decent theme, but super abusable. They shouldn't be able to attack the turn they are SS if they're able to be Summoned that easily, or you should raise the cost.

repeated effect {optional} [possibly removable]

[spoiler=OCG Fixes]Prototype-MK

During your Main Phase 1, while you control a face-up "Prototype" monster, you can pay 200 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. If a "Prototype" monster(s) you control would be destroyed by a card effect, {you can} Tribute this card instead.

 

Prototype-SD

Same When a face-up "Prototype" monster you control would be destroyed by battle, you can Tribute this card to take no Battle Damage from that battle. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, remove it from play.

 

Prototype-UV

Same When your opponent Summons a monster, it loses 800 ATK until the End Phase [of your opponent's turn]. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, remove it from play.

 

Prototype-XY

Same If a "Prototype" monster you control is destroyed by battle during your opponent's Battle Phase, {you can} Tribute this card to end the Battle Phase.

 

Prototype-XY

Same All "Prototype" monsters you control gain 200 ATK and DEF for each "Prototype" monster you control.

 

 

 

The low ATK of the archetype still doesn't balance the insane boost you'd get from swarming C4. (I'd have thought C4 would have a more "explosive" effect, given his name.) You could easily OTK with any one of these, Future Fusion, and Chimeratechs. Pics are generic machines, only C4 really stands out. Also, if these are the Prototypes, what are the finished results? Synchros perhaps?

 

Overall 7.5/10

[Ghoulish]

well there only lled prototypes in their name, theirs like no complete prototype called "manufactured" or something. i was orriginally gonna develop a type called "Proto" but changed it6 to the name instead. do u think instead of them not attacking the turn they are summoned i add the effect "this card cannot be sent from the Deck or Hand tot he Graveyard". what do u think? ty for the ocg help as usual im gonna look at that siute u showed me to do perfect ocg from now on.