Moonlight Princess, new card

[ff00I]

just got back from holiday and thought i'd make a new card

plz rate and comment

 

 

Lore: This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing "Night Wing Sorceress" and 3 Fairy-type monsters from your Field or Graveyard from play. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 monster with ATK of 3000 or less from your Hand or Deck to your side of the field.

[NeosWiseman]

The OCG is quite messed up

 

Lore: This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing "Night Wing Sorceress" and 3 Fairy-type monsters (from your hand, field, Graveyard, Deck?) from play. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 monster with ATK of 3000 or less (from where, again?) to your side of the field.

 

It should be better now.

It's good, though

7.5/10 ;-)

[ff00I]

corrected OCG

[NeosWiseman]

Great! It will be perfect, just decapitalize Hand -> hand

:D

[ff00I]

i'll do tht as soon as a normal upload is possible again (just takes too much time for a small task)

[NeosWiseman]

OK! :-)

By the way, where can I see that "Night Wing Sorceress"?

[ff00I]

that is actually my fav card in reality so i thought i'd use it to summon something powerful.

here is the real card