Kardo333 Posted April 24, 2010 Report Share Posted April 24, 2010 Soul Reaper: Souls to be mine.....Effect: This Card can not be Normally Summond or set. It can only be special summoned by tributing 1 Fiend monster and 1 Zombie Monster. During your Standby phase all your opponents monsters ATK are decreased by 150. When this card is sent to the graveyard as an result of battle you may tribute 1 Fiend monster and 1 Zombie Monster from your hand to special summon 1 Soul Reaper from your deck. Soul Steal: Your soul is mine.....Effect: Tribute 1 Soul Reaper to equip this card to 1 monster card on your opponents side of the field. The Equipped monster will lose DEF equal to its Original ATK, The Equipped monster will lose ATK equal to its Original DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Sorrow. Posted April 24, 2010 Report Share Posted April 24, 2010 Right away I got the wrong idea about the name I suggjest you change the name because people might think about the Soul Reapers from Bleach. Other than that your OCG needs a little work Capitilize Special Summon in the as an result part remove the n it should be as a result. Fiend-Type and Zombie-Type monster, its Overpowered to be a Lv. 8 monster 4/10.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finje Posted April 24, 2010 Report Share Posted April 24, 2010 nice work :) i would make a deck with "soul cards"......do u know what i mean^^this would be cool ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted April 24, 2010 Report Share Posted April 24, 2010 I don't really see why it is overpowered for a Level 8 you just Tribute Monsters to Summon it again and the effect isn't very powerful.If you are talking about ATK that is the least of someone's problems.A lot of OCG errors so seeing no one pointed them out i guess i will fix them. Soul Reaper- This Card can not be Normal Summoned or Set.This Card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 Fiend-Type Monster and 1 Zombie-Type Monster. During your Standby Phase, the ATK of all of your opponent's Monsters is decreased by 150. When this Card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard you can send 1 Fiend-Type Monster and 1 Zombie-Type Monster from your hand to your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Soul Reaper from your Deck. Soul Steal- Tribute 1 Soul Reaper on your side of the Field to equip this card to 1 Monster on your opponents side of the Field. The Equipped monster loses DEF equal to its Original ATK and it loses ATK equal to its Original DEF. There that should do it.7/10 overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1st Naruto Fan Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 Stop ripping off things from anime. I don't like it when that happens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kardo333 Posted April 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 wtf are you saying do you want me to put a yellow truck as a reaper instead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 crop the picture.... it would be better... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 Your OCG needs alot of work. The pics are a tad bland and the effects are OK. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kardo333 Posted April 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 ok il see what i can do to change that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 I just love the fact that people are criticising you for "ripping off" the Term "Soul Reaper", when they are called "Shinigami". Minor OCG errors, poor choice of pictures. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted May 4, 2010 Report Share Posted May 4, 2010 Right away I got the wrong idea about the name I suggest you change the name because people might think about the Soul Reapers from Bleach. Other than that your OCG needs a little work Capitalize Special Summon in the as an result part remove the n it should be as a result. Fiend-Type and Zombie-Type monster' date=' its Overpowered to be a Lv. 8 monster 4/10..[/quote'] Alot of Manga addicts at my school call them Soul Reapers it sounds more cool that Shinigami. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psycholera Posted May 4, 2010 Report Share Posted May 4, 2010 Does this mean, if your DEF is higher than your original ATK, that you can end up on a minus figure for your ATK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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