Luna Diviner Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Here they are Hope you like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 You forgot a period after hand. The last sentence should be :Increase your life points by 500 if the card is a trap card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 actually: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you may discard 2 cards during your Main Phase to reveal 1 random card in your opponent's hand. If it is a Trap Card, increase your Life Points by 500. (I might've gotten something wrong.) a good card but it's effect could be once per turn or something4.35/5good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Good pics, good effect. We needs Umi 2-Atlantis to really rate the second the card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Wow! Those are awesome! But ocean dweller looks like it's much stronger than 200 attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrathMonkey Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 I would give both of these cards a 7/10. As stated before, grammatical errors (many in the second one), and we need to see this "Umi 2-Atlantis". Otherwise, I really like the names and pictures. EDIT: Since "Ocean Dweller Barrier" is called such, I think it should have a much better DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 opponent's needs the ' before the s lol9/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 They aren't my good ones and barrier is meant to be a barrier against traps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 They aren't my good ones and barrier is meant to be a barrier against traps lol ok?all i said was that opponent's needs the ' before the s lol :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Well compared to the others I don't like these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Well compared to the others I don't like these. lol dont ever post cards you dont like!!! =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Sorry Its just no one knows what I am going through. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 7/10..you should try harder..hope to see more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 i guess theyre ok but like others have said there are grammar mistakes but overall id say 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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