The Beastly Fiend's! 2/?? [Beastformer Fixed, Added Telnok 4/27/2010]

[TableCloth358]

[align=center]This is my New Set. It revoles around Beasts though there all Fiends.

 

[spoiler= [b]Fixed[/b]Beastformer]

Note: I did change the requirement for Level 5 and up monsters to the hand instead of the Gravyeard, Hopefully making it less OP'd.

[spoiler=Lore]

When this card is Summoned, select 1 Beast, Beast Warrior, or Winged Beast-Type monster in either players Graveyard. If that monster is a Level 5 or higher you must remove cards in your hand equal to the selected monsters Level. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, this cards ATK, DEF, Level, Type, and effect(s) becomes the selected monsters.

 

 

 

[spoiler= [b]New![/b] Telnok, The Absorber]

[spoiler=Lore]

You can Special Summon this card by removing 2 Beast-Type monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 Beast-Type monster to take control of 1 of your opponents monsters untill the end of your turn. You cannot tribute that monster under any condition. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each Beast, Beast Warrior, or Winged Beast-Type monster in your Graveyard.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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[T3RA PROWL3R]

Fixed OCG:

 

[spoiler=Before]

When this card is Summoned select 1 Beast, Beast Warrior, or Winged Beast-Type in either players Graveyard. If that monster is a Level 5 or up you must remove cards in your Graveyard equal to the selected monsters Level. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, his cards ATK, DEF, Level, Type, and effects becomes the selected monsters.

 

 

 

[spoiler=After]

When this card is Summoned, select 1 Beast, Beast Warrior, or Winged Beast-Type monster in either players Graveyard. If that monster is Level 5 or higher, you must remove cards from your Graveyard equal to the selected monsters Level. As long as this card remains face-up on the Field, the selected monster's ATK, DEF, Level, Type, and Effect(s) become this card's.

 

 

 

I would instead change the ATK and DEF to 0, cuz it just runs better than more cards.

Pic is bad.

[TableCloth358]

So i forgot some commas. and the way you worded the last effect sounds wired. I'll keep it "As long as this card remains face-up on the field this cards ATK, DEF, Level, Type and effects becomes the selected monsters."

 

Field is not caped. If youre going to bother to correct OCG please make sure to read the OCG thread. I know you've just come back, so go refresh your memory.

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-167644.html

[Zektor]

Fixed OCG:

 

[spoiler=Before]

When this card is Summoned select 1 Beast' date=' Beast Warrior, or Winged Beast-Type in either players Graveyard. If that monster is a Level 5 or up you must remove cards in your Graveyard equal to the selected monsters Level. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, his cards ATK, DEF, Level, Type, and effects becomes the selected monsters.

 

 

 

[spoiler=After']

When this card is Summoned, select 1 Beast, Beast Warrior, or Winged Beast-Type monster in either players Graveyard. If that monster is Level 5 or higher, you must remove cards from your Graveyard equal to the selected monsters Level. As long as this card remains face-up on the Field, the selected monster's ATK, DEF, Level, Type, and Effect(s) become this card's.

 

 

 

I would instead change the ATK and DEF to 0, cuz it just runs better than more cards.

Pic is bad.

 

yeah pretty much this sums it up off by a little but anyway 9.5/10

anyway why do people use that format???

[TableCloth358]

What do you mean Format?

[Dandelo]

I like it. Effect, picture, etc. I can't say for sure if the effect is overpowered or not, though. I mean, the cost is removing monsters from play, but you could make Beastformer into a pretty powerful card, depending on the monster you pick in either Graveyards. 8/10.

[TableCloth358]

Yeah i thought about that. I was thinking about making it discardig cards or just removing monsters. What do you think.

[Dandelo]

Maybe you should limit the Level of monster it can become. But it's your card, so it's all up to you.

[BulletMan]

I saw some OCG errors in the OCG fixes, so I fixed those up:

 

When this card is Summoned, select 1 Beast, Beast Warrior, or Winged Beast-Type in either players Graveyard. If that monster is a Level 5 or higher you must remove cards in your Graveyard equal to the selected monsters Level. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, its ATK, DEF, Level, Type, and effect(s) becomes the selected monsters.

 

Pretty good. Alright art, decent effect.

 

I'll give 7.7/10 8)

[TableCloth358]

Thanks for the correct fix X-L. I'll update in the morning

[TableCloth358]

Updated! Added Telnok!

[Zektor]

its pretty good 9/10

by format i mean the style of the card

[TableCloth358]

Oh that i made i with MSE?

[TableCloth358]

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