Pchi Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 I've just made them up, here they are: Laval PrincessLevel 4/ Attribute FIRE/ Type Pyro/ ATK 1400/ DEF 200When this card is Normal Summoned, you can add 1 "Laval" monster, except "Laval Mermaid", from your Deck to your hand. It cannot be Summoned this turn. If this card is selected as an attack target, you can send 1 "Laval" monster from your hand to the Graveyard to negate the attack. Laval Guardian AngelLevel 4/ Attribute FIRE/ Type Fairy/ ATK 0/ DEF 2000Description: During either player's Damage Step, when a face-up "Laval" monster you control battles, you can send this card from your hand to the Graveyard to have that monster gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase. While you have 3 or more "Laval" monsters with different names in your Graveyard, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard to send 2 "Laval" monsters from your Deck to your Graveyard. Phoenix DragonLevel 8/ Attribute FIRE/ Type Dragon/ ATK 2400/ DEF 1600Description: When this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove from play 1 Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard to Special Summon it. I've been appreciating the idea of combining two main legendary creatures from Chinese Mythology for much time, though because of lack of options I had to use a picture which merges their Western counterparts, but that isn't a problem, as the image is really nice. Maybe, as this idea isn't hard to conceive, there's someone else who have already done a card like this, so I consider this only one of the many paths possible to Phoenix Dragon card idea. Tell me if it's broken. I hope you like them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Marluxia~ Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 No OCG errors, SOOO 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TableCloth358 Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 The Pictures aren't loading. You need t look int that. But beside that point i will rate based on the Info provided. @ Card 1; It's basic. I see no OCG. Butthis card is useless untill i see more of te archtype. so 5/10 @ Card 2; to Special Summon it? The Removed from play monster? or this card? please clarify. 7/10 So overall 6.8/10 i'll need to see the pictures to know whats it realy about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pchi Posted April 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 The Pictures aren't loading. You need t look int that. But beside that point i will rate based on the Info provided. @ Card 1; It's basic. I see no OCG. Butthis card is useless untill i see more of te archtype. so 5/10 @ Card 2; to Special Summon it? The Removed from play monster? or this card? please clarify. 7/10 So overall 6.8/10 i'll need to see the pictures to know whats it realy about. I uploaded them again, and it seems that they are showing themselves now. Also, I've corrected the text for Phoenix Dragon. You can find more info about Lavals here: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Lavals Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TableCloth358 Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 Oh okay thanks for that Link. The only thing i see wrong now is the pictures. They don't look YGO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pchi Posted May 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2010 I know it. But I couldn't find pictures that matched the style of YGO cards AND my ideas for the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pchi Posted May 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2010 I changed drastically "Laval Mermaid"'s effect, trying to make her better, because I realized she was quite unnappealing with her former ability... Rate it now: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excallibur Posted May 9, 2010 Report Share Posted May 9, 2010 There nice and all but they are EXTREMELY bland, give them some more life 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted May 9, 2010 Report Share Posted May 9, 2010 Mermaid is neigh-perfect - exactly what Larvals needed for a new name, a decent level 4 or lower and a boost to consistency. This really helps them since a lot of there monsters currently feel a tiny bit sub-par. Phoenix might see some use in hopeless, but I don't think it would be a major card to change any Decks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pchi Posted May 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2010 I thought for some time and decided to change the Mermaid's name and image, because I couldn't see anymore her as a mermaid, it didn't fit her effect, for some reason. So I redesigned her as "Laval Princess", the current used image will be slightly altered after I get Photoshop and prepare a decent background for her. I also have to make the size of the image fit the space in the card better, but, for now, here it is: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted May 13, 2010 Report Share Posted May 13, 2010 Pchi, when u make edits to ur actual cards, u shud edit them into ur first post instead of putting them in a new replythere shud be a box in bottom right corner that says editclick quick editget rid of code and copy ur new one inthat simple :Pas for ur cards, pics meh but nice effects, aren't noobish at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pchi Posted May 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 Pchi' date=' when u make edits to ur actual cards, u shud edit them into ur first post instead of putting them in a new replythere shud be a box in bottom right corner that says editclick quick editget rid of code and copy ur new one inthat simple :Pas for ur cards, pics meh but nice effects, aren't noobish at all[/quote'] Well, if you check my first post, you'll see that I edited it as well. I just make a new reply to get your attention to the changes I make in the first one. But thanks for your commentaries, yours and everyone's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pchi Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Added a new Laval monster in the first post: Laval Guardian Angel!Rate, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 very good cards with nearly perfect ocg dont listen to others they fail XD, ok they work nicley but try to add more cards that fit to the strategy, 8.8/10, pictures slightly old and used before Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pchi Posted June 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2010 very good cards with nearly perfect ocg dont listen to others they fail XD' date=' ok they work nicley but try to add more cards that fit to the strategy, 8.8/10, pictures slightly old and used before[/quote'] Thanks, man :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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