Demon Master

[Yuni Katt]

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[A.Prime]

not bad mate!

but I think the last part must be like this:

....destroy all Spell and Trap Cards your opponent's control.

very good job!! 8/10

[Home Slice]

One question...by opponent controlles does it mean in his whole deck or on the field

[Yuni Katt]

On the field Sorry

[Home Slice]

Then I would change the last part too:

destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your opponents field

[Teh ZWOOTS]

OP'ed. Also, you made an OCG error.

Wrong: "...by removing from play 5 DARK monsters from your Graveyard."

Right: "...by removing 5 DARK monster in your Graveyard from play."

I'm too tired to notice/care about anything else....

7/10

[MibeR]

Hei,,did this monsters you want to i see friends??

 

i dont get the mean of your PM..

[Symbiote]

Maybe lower ATK and DEF a little.

Somewhat OP.

8/10

[Abyssimal]

lolz i like this card i used the pic as well

5/10