YamiYubel Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 This is my first card so can you please tell me if I have something wrong K:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fidelcastrate Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 for every dragon monster where? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Underpowered, good pic, lower level to 3. Grammar problems. 7/10Here is the correct effect:For each Dragon-Type monster on of the field, increase this cards ATK by 200. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logmon1 Posted December 28, 2007 Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 You need spaces on both sides of that slash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiYubel Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 Thanks anyway this is my first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 for every dragon monster where? Exactllystill underpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 You don't need Dark in the card type... and the effect should be: "For every Dragon-type monster XXX, increase this card's ATK by 200 points." Replace XXX with: "on your side of the field""on your opponent's side of the field""on the field""in your Graveyard""in your opponent's Graveyard""in either player's Graveyard""that has been removed from play""on your side of the field and Graveyard""on your opponent's side of the field and Graveyard""on the field and in either player's Graveyard" Or whatever else you want. Most of them are underpowered though, only 6, 7 and 9 would make it balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 should be Dragon-Type monster, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiYubel Posted December 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 Is this a improvement? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 8/10 now good pic nice name nice effect and well done for spaces in shadow / Dragon good for first try:-o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 its pretty good so you get 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiYubel Posted December 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 8 / 10 For effort....Good job! Some mistakes here and there... but still pretty cool! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 ye....8/10 coes your new ... take out the Shadow in the type zone...:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted December 29, 2007 Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 8/10 U R NEW, good try just edit your monsters effect "For every dragon monster" for every dragon monster where? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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