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1st; Nice. Very Nice for a newb (New Memeber) though your OCG needs to be reworded, but beside that nice and orignal. Good pic but it needs to be resized, if you don't know how to do that just PM me and i'll help. Lol i love helping out da newbas.

OCG~ You dont need to say "to your opponent's Life Point's." you just say "to your opponent." Thats the only thing i see good job. it's Ballanced so overall 9/10 good job kid

 

2nd; This one is pretty good. I Love the picture, were did yo get it? Your OCG is alright once agon just need rewording. Check out the OCG link in my Signature that shoud help a Little bit, though the actual words in OCG you've got them down.

OCG~ By discarding this card from your hand to your Graveyard during your opponent's Mian Phase, destroy all face-down Spell and Trap cards your opponent controls.

 

Now i find this card OP'd (Overpowered) you need to either add "destroy all face-down Spell or Trap cards on the field." or make it so your have to discard 2 cards or something. but cuz your a newb this is Fantastic! 8/10 for this one but keep up the good work.

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P.S. PM me if you need anything:) i'm always down to help out a New Memeber.