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What's to like? You totally killed the mood of it. Honestly? I dont think you knew what the hell the end result was going to be, went with it and started riding it hoping to get praise.

 

Lets see...

 

For one, you have that radial gradient light right above where it should be. I swear, shift 5px down and it would have been so much better. But right there? Like you did it randomly with no intention of knowing why. That, and it doesn't enhance the picture at all as it's already very light.

 

You have a bubble C4D in the front which doesn't enhance it, even as a soft border. The bubbles on the side are fine. And the wireframe doesn't work in the slightest, except as a painful distraction.

 

Please tell me, what were you going for when you started fiddling around with this picture?

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What's to like? You totally killed the mood of it. Honestly? I dont think you knew what the hell the end result was going to be' date=' went with it and started riding it hoping to get praise.

 

Lets see...

 

For one, you have that radial gradient light right above where it should be. I swear, shift 5px down and it would have been so much better. But right there? Like you did it randomly with no intention of knowing why. That, and it doesn't enhance the picture at all as it's already very light.

 

You have a bubble C4D in the front which doesn't enhance it, even as a soft border. The bubbles on the side are fine. And the wireframe doesn't work in the slightest, except as a painful distraction.

 

Please tell me, what were you going for when you started fiddling around with this picture?

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I agree with you completely XD

For most tags, I get a sudden burst of inspiration just looking at a stock or render, but for this one, I had to go with the flow.

I wasn't expecting praise, I was expecting to give someone a gift, but failed at it XP

 

The lighting was put there because that's what my "artistic eye" thought was the best spot. Looking at it now, I agree a few pixels down and perhaps more to the left would make it better.

The tag needed a light source, and now I feel I haven't blend it well, or to the needs of the tag.

 

The bubbles were used for blending and were my original plans for this tag. The wireframes were a bad choice on my part, perhaps a version two is in the orders?

 

My concept was to make a clean, almost "water" themed tag, adding to the "beauty" (yes, Korean women are very pretty IMO lol) of the focal. But, then the wireframes changed that.

 

I agree that I should have thought this out more, and now with a clear vision, I will construct version two. Night Walker, you lucky dog, you get two Asian girls.

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What's to like? You totally killed the mood of it. Honestly? I dont think you knew what the hell the end result was going to be' date=' went with it and started riding it hoping to get praise.

 

Lets see...

 

For one, you have that radial gradient light right above where it should be. I swear, shift 5px down and it would have been so much better. But right there? Like you did it randomly with no intention of knowing why. That, and it doesn't enhance the picture at all as it's already very light.

 

You have a bubble C4D in the front which doesn't enhance it, even as a soft border. The bubbles on the side are fine. And the wireframe doesn't work in the slightest, except as a painful distraction.

 

Please tell me, what were you going for when you started fiddling around with this picture?

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I like it. So fuck off.

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I like it. So f*** off.

 

Why spend $100 on a gift' date=' when a smile will do just fine?

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What you think is crap, I think differently. It may not have the best lighting, concept, or execution, but for all i care it could have been made off MS paint. Its the thought that counts.

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