vytong Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 Description: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, and can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 Earth-Typed monsters. Each turn, send a face-up Earth-Typed monster on your side of the field to negate the opponent's attack. Damage calculations still apply. I am glad to say that this is my 1st monster card, and my best card so far.Rate/Comment please. I am getting better with the OCG texts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 ocg is off the whole thing maybe change ti to thisw :"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. this card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 EARTH monsters you control. Once per turn you can Tribute 1 face-up EARTH monster to negate an opponent's monsters attack. " i dunno where the damage calculation comes in? also dont make the stats so high its comon for new people but trust me it doesn tmake the card look any better. pic is good and idea is okay. 5/10 atm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vytong Posted May 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 I thought people might think its gonna be UP if I put it too low. :? and the :This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, and can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 Earth-Typed monsters. part was supposed to be the other text but i did my text wrong lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 nahh man cards basically shouldnt have stats like 3500 and 4000 unless theyr a hard fusion. maybe change the ATK to 3000 and the Def to 2900 and add an effect like if your oppoentn activated a card affect that aims to destroy a card ont he field youc an tibute 1 face-upp EARTH onster you control to negate the effect b ut its up to u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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